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Published: 2003-03-15 20:10:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 349; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 42
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Description My eyes had closed involuntarily and I noticed I had stopped breathing. I let out the air in a moaning sigh. “Lily, you know better.... it’s cruel.” The words escaped my lips as I blindly turned to face you and wrap you in my arms.

My eyes flew open, wide with shock and my jaw dropped slightly. I had been ready to just hold you for a while and kiss you... but when I turned... Damn.... You were undressed, mid-change for work... and simply standing there in your bra and underwear, your dark hair flowing over your shoulders and down your back. Our hips together, your arms around my waist, I was unable to speak. My arms glided gently over your bare shoulders and arms, smoothing out your hair, and my breathing quickened. I got trapped for a moment in your eyes... with your beauty before me, it was the only safe place to look.
“Damn Lily... uh...ah... I...” Damnit ‘zan... snap out of it. I knew I was stammering, but this was too much. Immediately I felt a need to kiss you, and touch all the flesh that was before me... but I held back.
You however, did not. Your hand came up to my cheek and pulled my chin in towards you until our lips met. Our kiss was passionate... lust-filled and fueled by long months of frustrated impatience. My arms moved of their own accord and wrapped tightly around you, pulling you close to me as our tongues greeted each other; each kiss made us hunger for more. Each breath we took was faster than the one before as we pulled on each other, as if desperately trying to pull our bodies together into one.
It took only a few moments before it was too much for me to take. I broke away from the kiss and feverishly traced your neck with my lips as my hands strayed to your sides. Your head tilted back, and you smiled as I reached and picked you up, one arm under your shoulders, the other under your knees. Your laugh was like a song, floating through the air, only stopping at my kiss. I carried you the few steps to your bed, and couldn’t help but take in every inch of your body in my sight as I laid you down.
I breathed jaggedly as I moved to straddle you, placing a knee on either side of your hips. Broad smiles were accompanied by giggles and awe filled eyes. I watched you, lying beneath me, looking up at me with eyes as clear as the water on a sunny day, yet dark and beautiful. I reached over and took your hands, and without a word pulled them up to be even with your neck as I leaned over and kissed you gently. Oh gawd... You’re so beautiful... I couldn’t say a word, even as I released your hands and sat back up on my haunches. My hair fell into my face, covering my eyes slightly, but I let it. Right now, only you mattered at all to me.
I wanted to take you... and I knew that at this moment, I was allowed to. In my minds eye I saw us together, naked and making love, sweet kisses on exposed flesh, skin on skin contact sending tingles between us as the rhythm of our breathing followed our pulses, climbing as we did. I watched your back arching, bending to match the smile on your face and my hands pulled the small of your back to me and kisses were lavished on your neck and collarbone. As you lay back down and my fingers began to play along your skin, I watched the hair on your arms stand up and smiled wickedly.
Now was time to play, to finally be with you in ways we had only dreamed of before, and I would take full advantage. Work was tossed aside while lay in your bed together and explored the body before us, each in turn. The night would pass in bliss and pure pleasure...
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Comments: 8

abstract-goddess [2003-03-24 23:59:06 +0000 UTC]

Work was tossed aside while we lay

Again, very few errors and a lot of word play and passion. I'm not sure how much more I can read. This'll give me ideas, and I doubt Chase would appreciate the thoughts

Well written and beautifully crafted. I'm starting to understand the wonderful thing you and toxic have....

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akyra [2003-03-19 06:04:10 +0000 UTC]

you deported the italics.

*shrugs*

they didn't pay their rent anyway.

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akyra [2003-03-19 05:36:26 +0000 UTC]

in italics no less.

very nice. very sublime, almost, without being trashy or romance-novelly.

w00t for 'zan!

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vashgard [2003-03-16 23:43:19 +0000 UTC]

It's getting hot in here...so take off all your clothes....mmm...mmm...wait a second...vashgard does not sing rap. Sorry about that, good job Erin...I like. By the way...TROG DOR !!!!

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sunrunner68 [2003-03-16 05:06:42 +0000 UTC]

Clear and concise. As ~calthas said, good flow. Well done.

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calthas [2003-03-16 02:18:26 +0000 UTC]

*looks for drapes to hide the scene* Am I intruding? *chuckles* still has a nice flow to it.

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toxic-erotica [2003-03-15 21:17:20 +0000 UTC]

I would like to note that I'm blushing....severely...damnit rin. :> BLUSHING! ME!

whew, is it hot in here? it sure seems hot in here....whew...


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dunkler-adlig [2003-03-15 20:28:25 +0000 UTC]

i think this is a good description of a first sexual encounter... i know the feeling... i guess that's all i can say... excellent descriptions!

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