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BeckyKidus [2018-11-22 16:44:18 +0000 UTC]

A short critique from :

This is really well done! The jacket simply looks amazing The prepositions look great, and I really like the way you drew her expression! There is also nice contrast in the piece.

To the things you could improve. I would have added some more shadows and highlights around her cheek, but this is not a big problem. I would also add some more highlights and shadows to the hair. Right now the hair is just a bunch of lines, all in the same shade. Hair usually clumps together a bit, and there would be some shadows around the ear. There is also a very dark shadow between the hair and her face, and adding more shadows to the hair might help a bit and prevent this from being too distracting.

But all in all this is really well done, and once again - that jacket looks great! The eye is also lovely Keep it up!

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roundtower [2018-11-16 14:55:18 +0000 UTC]

* ¡Fantástico trabajo! Lo hemos destacado dentro de la carpeta "Featured nº4 ó Destacados nº4" en Special-Groups. (Es la carpeta donde se exhiben los mejores trabajos del grupo).
¡Por favor, queremos ver más trabajos tuyos en el grupo!

 

* Fantastic work! Featured in Special-Groups in folder Featured nº 4. (Best works of the group). 
Please, We want to see more works in the group of you!

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