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royalocean — Don't Tell Me It's Over
Published: 2009-09-28 16:03:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 528; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 6
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don't tell me it's overbecause i'm not going to listen
and you can push me away
try to shut me out
but no matter what
i'm not going anywhere
tell me anything
you don't love me
you want me to go
you don't want to try
you've already given up
you're tired of getting caught up
none of it will matter
because i'll always tell you
i'll never give up
and i refuse to accept
that you don't care anymore
maybe i'm stubborn
maybe i'm hardheaded
maybe i'm wrong
or maybe
i'm inlove
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Comments: 28
Damn...this is exactly what my own boyfriend always does and says when I'm in such a mood 
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i really liked the ending.
in a way, this is cute.
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the comment is beautiful too. I think the repetition is really effective here. well done (:
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god i love this so much! it's amazing, i literally almost cried at the beauty of this! Your shockingly amazing with words!
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seriously you are absolutely amazing! i am still trying to compose myself because of your poem!
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This was very genuine and heartfelt.. I understand the emotion in here very well and I'm sure we can all relate.. The fact that you are willing to fight for love shows a lot about your character!
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Very adorable! lol Reminds me of how stubborn my boyfriend is with me when we get into arguments.
I hope things are okay for you though?
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Oh no worries, this was written about old experiences.
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Oh phew! That's good then.
Very well written for being based on old experiences.
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This is the first author's comment I've actually known the song! 
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Haha awesome!
And thanks so much.
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I like it, love. Lots of emotion there, and it's easy to sympathize with it.
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That last bit was really effective! I like the author's comments too... Maybe you could develop that into another one. ^_^
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The author's comments are Broken by Lifehouse.
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Oh... Now, I feel silly. ^_^' I'll have to listen to that...
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Ok. But I guess this means that the author's comments on your other works aren't all yours either, are they? I should stop assuming things...
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Some are mine, some are lyrics, some are random quotes.
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Oh, so I wasn't entirely stupid. That makes me feel better. But shouldn't you say if they're not yours?
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I usually do. Some times I get lazy lol. I submit so many pieces, I either a. get lazy or b. forget.
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Well, I guess that's fair enough.
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weirdly I like the author's comments better than the poem lololololzz! I've been finding tht quite a lot recently acutally ¬_¬
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