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rudepunkgurly — the part when they kiss
Published: 2005-07-10 08:21:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 193; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 8
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this is what I remember;lying in silence.
losing myself within the ceiling.
tracing each curve, each slanted line that collided back to itself.
thinking to myself, "this moment is really infinite."
then looking back and noticing
the shadows reflecting off his tranquil, motionless face.
the sheets were nothing special
yet the feeling of rapture was overwhelming.
each inhale brought an unknown pleasure
that filled my heart to the stainless rim.
I was laughing about how airplanes represent the feeling of indifference
and then I captured a glimpse, a split hollow second
of how you completed me.
and then, out of nothingness, it was gone.
i was really just searching for a reason to stay.
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that filled my heart to the stainless rim.
^ hearts have rims? I just think it was an odd word to use.. I get the point though.
I was laughing about how airplanes represent the feeling of indifference
^ how do the represent feelings of indifference..
At first when I read this poem I had two ideas of where it was heading.. Either he was sleeping and you were searching for something, or you killed him and were searching for an answer..
I like it, its very intense, its intriguing and yet.. It brings almost a wonderful feeling inside.. I like it as I said before..
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sigh
realising the fall
seeing the fall
then hitting the ground
reality
moments there
moments gone
sigh
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