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Published: 2013-11-21 01:58:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 22508; Favourites: 2058; Downloads: 0
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Contest entry for rini-tan Alice and design belongs to her


.....finally finished it ...while being killed by projects and essays and exams orz...


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Ruri-dere In reply to ??? [2013-12-01 08:44:59 +0000 UTC]

sorry, plz read the description before u critique

 this is not really appropriate becuz this is a contest entry for rini-tan's oc contest, its her character/design, plz refer everything to her 




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motohaRa27 In reply to Ruri-dere [2013-12-01 08:55:49 +0000 UTC]

i'm glad you replied~ 
hontouni gomenasai! (╥_╥) my cousin was the one who submit the critique..
**bows** すみません she's been using my dA a while ago

but..your OC is kawaii~ ´ ▽ ` )ノ
she's cute~ <3 (◕‿◕✿)

she looks like alice? isn't she? (•⊙ω⊙•)
i apologize for what my cousin said~ (╯︵╰,) if you ever asked me what rating i've giving her, i'll give RATING: 101% すてきな デス! (≧◡≦)

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Ruri-dere In reply to motohaRa27 [2013-12-01 08:58:50 +0000 UTC]

noo shes's not my oc

as i said its 's OC , and her name is Alice , please refer everything to her , she's the designer of this Alice QAQ


sorry for the confusion

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motohaRa27 In reply to Ruri-dere [2013-12-01 09:06:30 +0000 UTC]

oh (≧◡≦)  iindesu~ 
what do you mean about "refer everything" (•⊙ω⊙•)
私は理解していません ?

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Ruri-dere In reply to motohaRa27 [2013-12-01 09:14:58 +0000 UTC]

no its ok its no big deal lol...its just that the character is rini's

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motohaRa27 In reply to Ruri-dere [2013-12-01 09:44:36 +0000 UTC]

oh ´ ▽ ` )ノ

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Nekokorochii [2013-12-01 05:32:20 +0000 UTC]

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This is very beautiful looking! You did a lovely job! ^-^ I'm not very good at critiques, so please don't get mad at me ;w;

First of all, her facial structure is gorgeous. I love the way you coloured the eyes. The shading on the face is also very nice ^-^ Her body shape is very good too. She looks a little bit skinny though, but it is still very beautiful >u< Her hair is so stunning, I just cannot describe it ^-^ One more thing I want to point out, her hand holding the card, how is she holding it? Would you hold a card like that?

Overall, I think this is a lovely picture ^-^ It is very detailed and the shading is divine. Beautiful work <33

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Ruri-dere In reply to Nekokorochii [2013-12-01 09:16:24 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the critique~


well as for the card i purposely wanted to be like that cuz i think its more elegant than the normal ways of holding a card lol

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Nekokorochii In reply to Ruri-dere [2013-12-01 20:15:54 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome ^-^

Ah, I see! >u<

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YagiMatsu [2013-12-01 05:15:58 +0000 UTC]

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Since I haven't done any critiques in a while, I decided to do one for you for your awesome art! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/>

First off, I'm going to point out what I like about this drawing. I love how you did the hair and how it's flowing. I also like Alice's pose, and how you did the wrinkles in her clothes too (I envy your skills e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h… " width="15" height="13" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="357" title="Heart"/>). I also love how you chose the spade of hearts card, too. <3
I also love how you did the background, too, with all the diamonds and the lace in the middle.


As for the cons, I don't see anything wrong at all, which is good! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="387" title=" (Wink)"/> But again, this is amazing as usual! I'm sure that =Rini-tan will like this!

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Pyramid-HeadApproves [2013-11-23 03:48:45 +0000 UTC]

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I really like this style of art you do. I can't quite put my finger on it, but your style is just unique. I can't find a piece in your gallery that isn't beautiful.

I especially like this piece because of the wonderful colors you chose. The dress was my favorite part. You chose the perfect shade of blue for it. Eye catching, yet not obnoxious. I also like the idea of you putting blue on the roses instead of red. It adds to the originality and goes so well with the rest of the picture.

All the details in the picture are wonderful and so realistic, right down to the ruffles in her dress. I enjoy very much looking at this picture.

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awsomeartist01 [2017-11-21 04:22:45 +0000 UTC]

wow this is amazing

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Liz-H-Alexander [2017-02-10 02:52:55 +0000 UTC]

So beautiful!  Well done.

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luo-chan [2016-09-07 01:53:05 +0000 UTC]

rinni had an alice design? >~> i thought it was just the classic alice from the actual stories

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MiuMew123 [2015-05-22 03:22:55 +0000 UTC]

eyes so big.... O.O

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JennaAurora [2015-05-02 09:33:46 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!

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yasminthekiller [2015-01-21 16:28:46 +0000 UTC]

kawaii

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Irislady [2015-01-19 04:33:13 +0000 UTC]

This is so pretty!

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Cali-kawii-chan [2014-03-30 19:49:04 +0000 UTC]

Hi its me agin i have too agree with Mani-hime. Alice looks GREAT but she said that u picked the spades A of hearts. And the key and roses look so well real.I LOVE your ART its VANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!XD <3!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Cali-kawii-chan In reply to Cali-kawii-chan [2014-03-30 19:50:43 +0000 UTC]

Sorry i mean she said u picked spades when u picked A of HEARTS!!!!!<3

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Lady-Suchiko [2014-03-04 17:55:10 +0000 UTC]

Lovely color scheme ~

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AnaLunottina [2014-02-17 21:34:36 +0000 UTC]

I really like the Alice'pose! Awesome!

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laura13-7 [2014-02-09 19:40:17 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!

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PluviolLullaby [2014-01-18 01:24:07 +0000 UTC]

This is an absolutely gorgeous version of Alice, I love it

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glaceon-master-18 [2014-01-16 10:32:41 +0000 UTC]

this is beautifur!!!

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NaruFan808 [2014-01-01 02:02:59 +0000 UTC]

Very pretty~! >w<

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Untiokochikun [2013-12-05 07:10:36 +0000 UTC]

This is really beautiful! I love the white roses, and she's sooooo pretty!

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Everglaves [2013-11-29 09:13:28 +0000 UTC]

This is really beautiful, i love all the coloured used and the way that it is coloured is really stunning.


If you like OC contests i'm currently hosting one if your interested

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blanket86 [2013-11-29 07:31:56 +0000 UTC]

Very interesting and beautiful work! Great style. I love it!

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crying-king-art [2013-11-28 04:04:50 +0000 UTC]

Damn! Just looking at the thumbnail, I already knew I had to click D:

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AgentKaas [2013-11-27 14:07:23 +0000 UTC]

awesome

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AgentKaas [2013-11-27 14:07:16 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!

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Flariachan [2013-11-26 15:53:08 +0000 UTC]

This is really beautiful, it's one of my favorites from the entries~

Composition is great and colors are in balance.

And the dress looks so pretty... >u<

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Tylerthefox [2013-11-26 03:45:23 +0000 UTC]

Looks like Belarus XD

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ChuChu-jellie [2013-11-25 18:13:06 +0000 UTC]

AMAZING! I say you win :3

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NaKaJi143 [2013-11-25 04:51:46 +0000 UTC]

Wow, I love this... eveyrthing about it. Dress looks so fluffly... white roses oh gawd this is awesome.
Good job *Ruriko-sama   .... (I want that talent. dam it. )




༼ つ ◕◡◕ ༽つ I cast thy potato blessings upon you.

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Ruri-dere In reply to NaKaJi143 [2013-11-25 04:56:38 +0000 UTC]

GAHHH sorry wrong reply...


omg thanks for ur support <3

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NaKaJi143 In reply to Ruri-dere [2013-11-26 01:44:35 +0000 UTC]

wrong reply..?

and you're welcome~

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Ruri-dere In reply to NaKaJi143 [2013-11-25 04:56:03 +0000 UTC]

LOL me too

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NaKaJi143 In reply to Ruri-dere [2013-11-26 01:46:18 +0000 UTC]

lol nvm I replied before this (the one i saw and I said " wrong send..? )
and ish ok for the wrong send

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XandImus [2013-11-24 04:33:34 +0000 UTC]

a most radsome alice character art

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EpicsauceShota [2013-11-24 02:40:13 +0000 UTC]

Epicsauce *o*

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FFDP-Guy [2013-11-24 00:20:16 +0000 UTC]

I love her red eyes

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oMuffins [2013-11-23 23:56:10 +0000 UTC]

This is just stunning! Colors are amazing... I just can't stop looking at it. o.O

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life-as-art-ist [2013-11-23 20:34:03 +0000 UTC]

This is unbelievable! We must chat over coffee in our imagination... O_O

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FairyTailMage17 [2013-11-23 15:38:16 +0000 UTC]

oh my gosh so cute~

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Voxejst [2013-11-23 06:08:17 +0000 UTC]

The line art is fantastic. The color blending is what I want to be able to do someday. If I must critique, the red eyes are...odd. A few more contrasting colors might take my eyes off of hers. But then...why would I want that?

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snoweffectjw [2013-11-23 05:51:58 +0000 UTC]

Whoa love it!! love the details of her hair and outfit... and love the vibrant colors

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Chingarrin [2013-11-23 05:39:08 +0000 UTC]

I'm just gonna say AMAZING!!! Congratulations!!!

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ZeMage34 [2013-11-23 05:34:24 +0000 UTC]

*melts* This is perfect

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