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Published: 2010-03-26 02:20:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 341; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 5
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Description And you open your arms
Like summer
And you spill over the world
With a heated frenzy
Of waves and scents
And sweat and sloth
And it's all
Up
And
Up
And highs in the 90's
And Otterpops
And then I realize
That you're not
A season
That devours cold
And energy
And you're a boy
With eyes as green as grass
Full of chlorophyl
And brown muddy
Dirt
And hair like
Birds nests
that are twittering
And jumping
And getting caught by
Cats
And I love
It
Because summer
Has always been
My favorite season
And you aren't
Afraid
To
Rain

And it all is
All over me
Sticking
And dripping
This
Cluttered
Molecular
Responsibility
That
S

L

O

W

S

Down my productivity and says
Hey
You've got
Stuff that you
Need to do
Why are you writing,
I say to myself,
You should be
Driving
Drawing
Testing
Singing
Snogging
Studying
Walking
Running
Crying
Pacing
Talking
Acting
Mathing
Reading
Learning
Expelling information
Whenever
They
Ask
And it had
Better
Damned
Be
Right.
(Punctuating)

And I think
This year
Is so
So
Busy
But,
And maybe because,
It will be
The best

Because summer is
Opening his arms
To make me lazy
And warm
And unfocused
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Comments: 3

cricketv [2010-03-31 18:27:20 +0000 UTC]

I love this

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eriNovelist [2010-03-27 16:06:38 +0000 UTC]

This is great! I really like the structure.

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ryu-son In reply to eriNovelist [2010-03-28 06:10:24 +0000 UTC]

Aw! Thank you so so much!

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