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s-yl — The Prayer Went Unheard
Published: 2003-12-30 19:28:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 2245; Favourites: 67; Downloads: 1576
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To Chris and othersStock ~meastock
Brushes *arpad *aleksandra *astarot
Complete Text:
I thought i had been here before
Maybe I've really been
I'm probably another man
The shadow of my past
Remain of something already dead
Like a ghost waiting in this world
For the door to an afterlife
All my screams, even the loudest ones
Didn't reach any ear
All my tears, even the darkest ones
Didn't touch the ground.
They are all still in me
Banging my head,begging to leave...
Leave this mind too small for them
Too small for the burdens they carry
And all the words i tried to write
My messages to this world
Written with my black blood
On decaying walls...
Vanish before me....
Before any eye can see them.
And the end of all i am
Seems nearer every day
As all the purposes i had
Slowly went away
Only i am left, or at least my empty shell
So i just wait for my time to come
To reach the rest of me
--Fade Out--
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Comments: 94
Hope you got over it, sucks to feel like this
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-chuckles- Funny thing is my name's Chris..
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well done ! i like the feeling of this...hmm..great
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Haha I do say I'm sorry. Don't mind the I know your sister line. I meant that for another comment. Nevertheless, I do love your work.
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thanks, love that goonies avatar
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I love it. I can somewhat relate... But such is life. (oh I know your little sister xD)
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Thanks, but it's all thanks to that beautiful stock picture
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great picture plus 
i feel like i am sitting there ...
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Wow! Absolutely brilliant! Gotta admit that I don't often like heavy green-influence, but this is an exception! Great stuff! A
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thats amazing.... the image is stunning im kind of speachless like thats exacly how i feelright now like so much is going on but im sitting in a corner just observing every thing that is going on praying that i could maybe step out into life but to scared to make that step.
the poem was good im not really good at judgeing how good a poem is or not im the worlds worst writer so ill let otehrs tell you how good it is lol
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Don't worry i'm not good at judging poems technicaly either and personally i don't care. To me it matters that those works actually mean something to someone and so this comment of yours is greatly appreciated. Thank you my friend
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a really great artwork! the atmosphere is excellent!
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Wow o.o This is really striking and emotional, brilliant job, composition, colour, and everything-wise.
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Thank you, glad you enjoyed it
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questi tuoi ultimi lavori mi ricordano molto le atmosfere di un videogame altrettanto allucinante di qualche anno fa che si chiama sanitarium...complimenti davvero!!!
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Lo adoro quel gioco!!!!!!!!!!!! Grazie
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Bellissimo vero? io purtroppo non son mai riuscito a trovarlo dal mio "pusher" di programmi e giochi in lingua italiana....
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Ero ancora in grecia quando e uscito quindi non so se lo hanno mai tradotto in qualche lingua, ma non penso. Pero era davvero stupefacente come gioco
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mmm i love it ... the green adds a very eerie freaky feeling to it. great job
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very nice work..is that ur poem..if it is..i am ur fan... i am a poet myself..
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yeah i write all the stuff in my works. Glad you like them
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gorgeous. this expressed my current feelings so well. +fav
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Thank you my friend, glad you liked it
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I like the title ^^ this idea would be a very cool topic to work on ! The image looks a bit creepy to me... like those horror game style..
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yeah, i played a bit resident evil before doing this
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^^ hah that's why ~ u play clock tower too ?
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