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SadYukino — but it's not the same without you
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Published: 2012-01-02 15:13:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 859; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 92
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got inspired by Owl City - Vanilla Twilighti know it´s ugly don´t comment it btw there were not enought space fir the "loop"
constructive criticism is welcomed
isabella (c) Dan, Jeff and Disney
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Comments: 29
over all it's a beautiful piece of art! I loved the way you drew her sweater and hat. Though I see Isabella's signature bow is missing. I can see you wanted to draw it, but didn't. Whats the main defect and what's bothering me is her face. It should be a lot wider and her hair should be longer. The way you drew her head makes her head look like a half circle instead of a half oval.
Reasons of number of stars:
Vision: I loved the way that choose the tittle "but it's not the same without you" It really goes like a flow with her expressions, it's like she has lost some one close and thought she could live through it but it's not the same without him or her. That's why you got 4 stars. 1 star was not given because her expressions can be improved. For Example one of her cheek could be covering a bit of her eye.
Originality: it's not so original because it's copied from a scene in the song "Where did we go wrong" from the Christmas special. It looks like while listening to the song you paused the it and then by looking at it, drew this. Even though I love this Drawing but in my point of view it's not original so you get 2 star.
Technique: I love your technique of drawing this. It's like you drew a sketch but you can also color in this and it won't look messy. For this I gave you 4.5 stars. 1/2 star was not given because of the mistakes of her head and hair.
and last but not the least:
Impact: No matter what the mistakes are, the final drawing came out very impressive. As I told you before, I love her hat and sweater. the problem is that it's to 'boxy' the lines should be smoother and more rounder because most things specially human and clothes are rounded.
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thanks :3 really nice critique and when i look back at this one i can nothing but agree with you again thanks :3
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well is drawn of a episode where christmas is canceled
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que linda pick esta muy bn hecha me gusto mushoooo
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LOVE THE SONG & THE DREW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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