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sakura13 — Siu Long Nui
Published: 2005-12-15 05:52:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 5694; Favourites: 93; Downloads: 339
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A revised version of Xiao Long Nv . Hopefully this one this better than the last..
Edit: Haha, whoops, forgot to edit the description after resubmitting the picture. xD Anyway, I fixed some of the things mentioned in the comments... I couldn't fix her "bendy straws" though, since I am not very good with hands. @_@ I put the outlines back, just changed the layer to "Overlay" so it wouldn't be solid black lines... I also decided that the last background was too bright, and made it all hyper, so I desaturated a bit... Same with her lips... Took away the "line" between her upper and lower lip too, but not sure if it's visible... Err....what else...? I think that's all, for now. O_o
Edit 2: Fixed her face a bit more... She should look prettier than before, although I am not too sure...
Edit 3: Changed her hair a bit, with the help of ~CinnamonSin .
Probably overdid it a bit, but... heh...Okay, you know what...? Enough of this... IT'S NOT A KIMONO! The belts for kimonos are higher up, closer to her chest and there is usually a big bow in the back. (Also, I've noticed that kimonos tend to make women have a flat chest, although I am not sure if this is true...)
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Comments: 180
Her hair looks good. Her hands are alright. Not perfect, but not that bad either. The coloring is nice and smooth, pastel-feeling. Her expression is lovely. Her right shoulder looks a bit too wide, but other than that, it's a lovely piece.
CW
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oh I love this!!!!! I love the white, its very beautiful! so pure! i wish I had hair like that....and skin like that for that matter
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Lovely work, almost angelic, the detail in the clothes and hair is amazing
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this is so beautiful a bit like a japanese snowwhite
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Beautiful work. So well done, with the colours, shading and lighting. Really well done!!
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I like this a lot. I prefer the pose in this one. And the background too. I just really enjoyed the incredible saturation and lusciousness of colourin her face in the previous one. You could tell she was alive and radiant. This one's nice too, but seems a bit colder.
Sorry for the harshness! I mean well!
Great work though! Marvelous colouring!
Sorry for the late visit!
Thanks for the forum reply!
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This is really cool!!! ^^
I love the way the calming pale colors go so well togethor
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I love the hair and the serene look on her face. The clothes are very well done as well. The hands could use a little work, but the face is really the focal point of this picture, and thus the hands are hardly even noticable. Wonderful job. ^_^
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you are obviously a perfectionist (editing again and again) so i will point out the tiny insignificant flaw iv seen ... im so mean!... the hand in the back, left of the picture, is a bit unreal/rubbery looking compared to the rest. but the rest looks lovely!
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She's very beautiful- the face especially. I love the soft, cool colors that you used. They give her a very elegant look. Excellent work.
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the clothes are realy beautifully done! the hair is cute and the face is just very serene. the hands are ok
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I just love the overall the calmness that this pic radiates...And you're quite good at shading whites! That's not very easy, believe me. o_O
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Yeah, this is the sort of stuff that I like. The face looks brilliant, and the clothing looks really nice too.
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owww very nice! and the girl is really pretty as well!
I love the way you colored it^^
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That is simply beautiful. Very angellic-looking.
I see no mistakes, exept maybe her hand... Other than that, it looks fine ^^
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This is very nice. She looks so real, aside from the obvious look of "painted".
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Veyr beautiful image, I love the soft colors of this picture. It makes it very peaceful. Good work
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She looks so delicate and i like the high contrast that the hair makes with the rest of her face. I get a peaceful feeling while looking at this image!
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XD Backgrounds... 1) I am not very good at creating one. 2) It might take away the attention on the foreground...
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Sketched, scanned, Photoshop-ed.
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This is gorgeous. Its so simple and elegant, I really love it!
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I love this picture, mostly because I love the character. You did a great job with her hair, expression, and I expecially like her gown. It looks gorgeous.
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she looks absolutly beautiful! the background really compliments her! well done
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This is beautiful. I love the techniques you used. the are amazing.
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Good job with the hair and the proportions of the body. I do think that she looks stiff though. Her clothes do have good folds where they should be, but it just seems... like there is no weight to them. Check this out [link] it note how he fabric lays on the neck and shoulders. That is what I'm trying to get at.
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I think I know what I am missing...
... as soon as I finish my homework.
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Oi, that is such a beautiful work! Very well done on the coloring! And the face is lovely!
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Very soft gental feeling to her. I love the way her hair contrasts her outfit, very nice
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So beautiful. Nice soft, really soft, colors. She looks pretty, very beautiful. I like this.
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Her hair dosnt flow over her sholders, it is like some one took some hair and pasted it to her. One of her sholders looks like it was poped out of place. You did a great job on the coloring.
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I don't usually like animations, but this is pretty nice.
Good job buddy.
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Ummm
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