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Published: 2016-11-23 02:55:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 6865; Favourites: 149; Downloads: 24
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Coloured by my dear friend Trisha1024Next page
My Bonnie piece is coloured and complete! And MAN it was a lot of work!
Sketch piece: Me
Colouring / design: Trisha1024
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hi! I love this a lot, and in my opinion, I don't think there's too much I can critique! but here's what I think about your piece!
1. this is what I noticed first when looking at your drawing - and this might make it look like I'm somewhat of a perv but I promise I'm not haha. the way you drew the top of her legs, or under her va-jay-jay looks quite weird, maybe I'm the weird one but try doing that in real life with your legs, there's no gap there.
2. one leg is more pointed inward, and from how it looks the other one should have that inward point too, or maybe a bit more straight but it looks like a balloon. sorry, my wording in that was poor I didn't know how to correctly word it oops.
3. the linework and even the colours in some spots are a bit messy. the linework is alright and not overly messy but you can still see it. the colouring is good, but I noticed that where the shorts are folded up the skin overlays the shorts a tiny bit, I'm assuming you just filled it in with the paint bucket tool, I suggest making sure that all of it is filled in by just using the pen tool and filling in the parts that are a bit messy.
4. the way you highlighted everything looks really unnatural, for starters, you highlighted the hair two different ways, choose one and stick with it. the way you're highlighting everything on the body, clothes, and sword, is super unnatural, those kinds of highlights should only be used for hair highlights. the shading is good, however, in a way it is also unnatural as it doesn't make sense as it looks like the light is coming from the right and on the skin it looks like its coming from both up and down which isn't possible.
5. to be simple with this, the fire looks bad. I suggest looking up a guide.
6. the white outline takes away from the background, I suggest putting an overlay layer effect on it or something like that.
7. Connie is straight up covering bill in the background, I don't know if you meant for it to be like that but it doesn't look too great, I'd suggest maybe putting a smaller version of him next to her to show him off more.
8. the grey eyes look really weird, and almost not like eyes, I don't mean to be rude, but couldn't you have tried a little more with them?
9. finally. the light around bill looks off and unrealistic, i'd suggest using add glow, glow dodge, or overlay and lowering the opacity to make it look somewhat more realistic!
i hope my critique was helpful to you!
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Thank you so much for your critique. Keep in mind this was an art-trade, so all the colouring and line wasn't done by me. It was all thanks to my pal Trisha1024 .
if you really want to review my full artwork then I suggest you to look into my links.
The Reality We Live Within is Meaningless..
Two Bills in One Body?
Pearl!!!??
Beven Universe
Stanford X Rose Quartz AU
Reawakening The Beast
Dipper and Mabel Body Swap
The Moral of Choice and Sacrifice
Rick Sanchez (D-144)
Rick and Morty meets Handsome Jack
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One Sentence.
I LOAF IT, BUT BILL Y U DO DIS?
Umm, anyways. I like how you did this. It's really origional and I didn't see anyone do this! The anatomy, and well, everything is amazing!
Well, I gotta tell bill this:
Y U DO DIS!!!! *grabs Doritos and eats the Doritos* Y BILL Y. *cri*
Anyways, back to topic, I wanna say 32 words to this masterpiece.
YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES!
Umm, i'm done with this Critique :3
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Richter: Begone! You don’t belong in this world monster!
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Just when you thought he couldn't possibly be more evil. Surprises me everytime
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If that wasn't evil enough, then you should try take a look of this one.
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Yep, that's Bill all right. Probably his sadistic, twisted idea of a joke.
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Bill! (Grabs holy water in fused with herbs and throws at possessed Connie) Shoo Shoo bill! Begon you demon!
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Hhahaahahha...Really a holy water!!? Boy humans with their crazy religious believes are so gullible.
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Hmmmm Steven get the spray paint the twins and there friends we make the zodiac also get the memeroy gun
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It's a homage to Old Joseph from JoJo's Bizarre Adventure but that works too.
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I like hearing Arin Hanson's 'Engrish' comedy a lot for some reason.
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...
(Grabs the scythe)
Steven, we have an exorcism to perform.
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I'll get the holy water. You still have that silver and bronze crucifix?
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Sharpened and ready.
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Right then. If you'll do the honor of busting down the door?
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With pleasure.
(Kicks down the door.)
THE LIGHT PURGES!
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BEGONE DEMON, LEST YOU INCUR THE WRATH OF THE HEAVENS! D-:<
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(The possessed Connie screams in terror for a few moments before cackling with the voice of Bill Cypher.)
Connie/Bill: You didn't think it'd be that easy, did you?
Me: ...For a second there, yeah, I kinda did.
(The cross glows in my hand and creates a light whip. The whip cracks forward and wraps around the possessed Connie.)
BY THE POWER OF SELUNE, I BANISH YOU FROM THIS WORLD DEMON!
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"GYAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!! KNOW THIS CLOCK AND RABBIT!!!! I'LL GET YOU EVENTUALLY!!!!!!!!! YOU HEAR ME NEEEERRDDDDSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!"
A large energy wave envelops the room as Bill disappears from this plane of reality.
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Whew, glad that's over... wait I understand why he called you Rabbit but why did he call me clock?
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Timelord? No I'm not a Timelord... am I?
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Just going off the little blurb on your profile, chief.
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Maybe, but it takes some time.
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SHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIT SOMEONE'S GONNA BE UPSETTTTT
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Wait whose gonna be upset?
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Don't worry is for a contest.
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Oh boy. Well, either way, THIS IS AMAZING DUDE!! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK
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I was about to finish it
well that sucks
oh well
thats life for me
good job On the coloring though Trisha1024
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I will also earn you 30 points for your effort if you have a donation bar of course.
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yeah but my Bonnie drawing is gone though
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Sorry I forgot to tell you that. I have requested a friend of mine to color out Bonnie. Worrying this may take too long (forgive my impatience) I'd decided to request three of you guys as a contest. Better Bonnie looks the more likely will use it my new group icon, and don't worry I'll still display our work to my deviant gallery and the gallery of are deviant group. And I still earn you a lama badge.
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