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SamuraiDragon — Breath of Smoke

Published: 2012-03-09 11:42:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 1052; Favourites: 62; Downloads: 0
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Description Please tell me if the contrast is too high, my computer screen is on the fritz and I don't trust what Photoshop or dA is showing me.

A speedpaint done to relax a bit. Nothing special, though I was having fun playing with my shading. If you have any critique on the lighting in this please let me know!
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haphephilia [2012-03-09 12:23:06 +0000 UTC]

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The contrast is fine in my opinion; personally I feel that it adds to the effect that you're going after. The dragon looks as if it's made out of smoke itself, which I assume is the intended impression.

I just love how it's all faded into the dark background, but at the same time it's able to stand out - the smoke from the nostrils especially.

However, I feel that perhaps you could improve on the mouth-area, where the teeth seem broken-up almost. Perhaps the dragon is old and I'm very wrong, but I feel that it would be better.

Otherwise, a really good painting. Especially for a speedpaint, or something that's "nothing special" according to your description. It's earned a favourite from me, good job!

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SamuraiDragon In reply to haphephilia [2012-03-11 02:04:26 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou very much! I really appreciate you took the time to crit.

I worry about the contrast becasue in every program other than Photoshop, pictures show up increadibly dark and with jarring between colours and tones. PS has its own colour management, thankfully. I'm trying to make sure that what I'm making in Photoshop is how others on normal, working screens will see it. C: I'm glad it looks ok!

I agree about the mouth area - given a chance (since complteting it my computer has died) I'll go back and re-do them. I was going for a jaggedy look but some more effort in them would definitely help.

I say nothing special because I had no plan or direction when I started and to be honest it is a really common (I dare say boring) subject matter.

Again, thankyou very much for the input, and the favourite!

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Syroyoga16 [2013-06-15 02:40:15 +0000 UTC]

Wow! You make amazing/wonderful dragons. Keep up the great work dragon artist.

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SamuraiDragon In reply to Syroyoga16 [2013-06-15 12:35:15 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much! And for the faves/ watch as well, tis' much appreciated C:

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Syroyoga16 In reply to SamuraiDragon [2013-06-16 01:47:16 +0000 UTC]

Anytime. I love dragons a lot. You have no idea what dragons really mean to me. I love them a lot.

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Yowsie [2012-06-27 14:24:01 +0000 UTC]

I think it looks awesome, especially with the smoke effect and the texture on the dragon~
I also like the design of the head, makes it look both a bit ancient but still fierce with all those horns. ;O

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SamuraiDragon In reply to Yowsie [2012-06-30 13:03:05 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou ~ I was trying to go for a more old/traditional dragon with this fella C: Glad you like him!

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mcSini [2012-03-12 16:59:27 +0000 UTC]

wow, that's amazing : O
I love it keep up the good work :>

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SamuraiDragon In reply to mcSini [2012-03-18 02:20:32 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much C: !

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mcSini In reply to SamuraiDragon [2012-03-18 04:19:23 +0000 UTC]

np

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PreciousAngelWings [2012-03-09 20:27:58 +0000 UTC]

the contrast is not too high. this looks really cool. i LOVE the texture

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SamuraiDragon In reply to PreciousAngelWings [2012-03-11 02:09:16 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much! I ask about the contrast because when I view my art online on my computer screen its awful. In Photoshop it comes out how I like. Just wanted to make sure that how I see in Photoshop is how others see it. C:

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PreciousAngelWings In reply to SamuraiDragon [2012-03-11 04:04:39 +0000 UTC]

And that is why i answered you :3 I think it looks good ^^

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BANANAZ1193 [2012-03-09 16:44:47 +0000 UTC]

Very striking!

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SamuraiDragon In reply to BANANAZ1193 [2012-03-11 02:07:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Manah-Angel-Eyes [2012-03-09 15:11:10 +0000 UTC]

Oh my goodness that's amazing *o*

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SamuraiDragon In reply to Manah-Angel-Eyes [2012-03-11 02:07:13 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou!! C:

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Whisper-Of-Night [2012-03-09 11:44:20 +0000 UTC]

Contrast's just fine, and the art itself is very nice looking too, I love shape of this dragon's head ^^

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SamuraiDragon In reply to Whisper-Of-Night [2012-03-11 02:06:33 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a bunch! C:

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Whisper-Of-Night In reply to SamuraiDragon [2012-03-11 13:00:36 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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deceptivecalm [2012-03-09 11:44:07 +0000 UTC]

I love the composition of this, and I wouldn't say the contrast is too high at all.

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SamuraiDragon In reply to deceptivecalm [2012-03-11 02:06:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much! I ask about the contrast beause when I view my art online the contrast is high and tones are dark and jarred. It's ok in Photoshop and I wanted to make sure that that is how others are viewing it.

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