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Page 20 of mission 5 for the RESCUERS!
THIS IS THE MAIN MISSION, WHERE TEAMS HELP GUNPOWDER, MAPLE, FRESNEL AND DMITRI TO GUIDE SORBET AWAY FROM THE VILLAGE AND TOWARDS CREEPING WOODS.
This page was one I have been looking forward to since nearly the beginning of the mission. But I am just so glad that it is finished now...
So many teams... so many... so many...
Fun facts.
-There are 2 Charmanders on this page.
-There are 2 Luxio
-There are 2 Ralts and 1 Kirlia
-There is 1 Cyndaquil and 1 Quilava
-There is 1 Buneary and 1 Lopunny
-And there are 2 Deerling (awesome
)I'm shocked that there is no Eevee or Riolu in sight, though. Is that even possible? O.o
When I was deciding on who to go next to the Bandit Bros and Team Silverfang, I just wasn't sure. So... WHY NOT JUST INCLUDE ALL THOSE FINE FOLKS AT TAO TREE??? Makes perfect sense... for those who don't plan on sleeping ever...
Anyway, Mike is pretty much saying what you guys have all been saying ever since Anther reached the top of that cliff. Don't do it, its bad and stuff like that.
You think Mike chose the right words? I'm sure you guys would wanna kill me if in the next page I have Anther just shrug and say "They'll get over it." O_O
So I'm just going to go over there and pass out now, k? Ok.
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Cameos included on this page:
OMG THIS TOOK SO FREAKING LONG!!!!!
[Let me now if there are any links that go to the wrong place or something please?
]Mike: [link]
Team White Trash Circus: [link]
Ziggy from Team Blue Moon: [link]
Seraphina from Team Nightengale: [link]
Team Zephr: [link]
Team NewEnergix: [link]
Team Pyroshock: [link]
Jennis Gang: [link]
Team Pecha: [link]
-Team Elgyem: [link]
-Team Nighty Knights: [link]
Team Silverfang: [link]
Bandit Bros: [link]
Team Acrobatics: [link] Β§ion=&global=1&q=team+acrobatics#/d4757h6
Team Spark: [link]
Time Bandits: [link]
Team Frost Bloom: [link]
Cameos Needed: [link]
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Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! I will tell you, this is definitely one of the pages that I was the most excited to post. Both in terms of what was drawn and what was written.
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I can definitely see why! You put a lot of heard work into this piece, and it came out great! There's just so much emotion in it, and you managed to show that so clearly~
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Oh you flatter me.
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"Think about what your about to do!" snapped Mike, his tail in a reddish blue flame "think about who you'll be hurting if you do this!"
'i did'
"They're not here because they want to be famous! They're fighting to save the VILLAGE cause back home they have 'mon that they care about!" Mike sharpened his gaze "and for WHAT? A grasp at fame?"
'That's what i wanted my whole-'
"RESCUERS don't do that Anther! And deep down you know this!" he shouted "even if you TRICK everyone it was Sorbet! YOU'LL KNOW! YOU'LL KNOW THAT YOUR THE ONE THAT DID IT!"
'Of course i will!'
"THAT YOUR NOT A REAL RESCUER!"
'i am'
"THAT YOUR A FAKE!"
'i will never be shut u-'
"IS THAT REALLY WHAT YOU WANT ANTHER?"
'yess...'
"IS THAT WHAT HAZE DIED FOR?"
In front of his face he saw Haze, her face like pointed stones. Everything hit him at once, he was trying to help... The false words burnt his skin. The words then rushed through his ears like a wake up call...
Do you like it? the '' parts are thoughts while the "" parts are well in this case. Shouting.
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Yeah! It was cool! That is probably something very close to what I might have thought of if I had written in Anther's thoughts. So good job on that.
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Ack. Such a late reply. My apologies.
Anyhow, I went ahead and read the entire Mission and I have to say it was really well done. Good job on it! And I really love the panel placement on this page. Wow. So effective.
Thanks so much for the cameo! :D
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No worries!
It was no problem at all. The relationship between Seraphina and Vince worked out very well.
And thank you! Glad to hear that you liked it!
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Hopefully, this would be enough to bring back Anther to Earth. *crosses fingers*
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I love the breaking glass frames. Wow cameos
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Thanks! The glass took a lot of experimenting, that's for sure.
Yes... so many cameos... More cameos in this mission alone than all my other missions combined... multiple times probably.
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aklsndlanklanalknal This page
this page
you win the internet for this page :'D
Mike's speech had me well... speechless.
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My first free internet...
Thanks! It took a while before I got the speech right. But it looks like my persistence paid off.
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I think that page is just... amazing. I pride myself on being a good speaker, and I put that quality into Rafael, he's persuasive and a good pep-talker, but can scold someone into the ground when he needs to. So to see someone else, like you, doing what I love, only in awesome art... thats mind boggling and simply amazing :3
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Well I have had some experience in writing before. For about... 5 years or so during high school and beginning of university I was writing a fanfic. I got a lot of experience there. And for some reason, writing dialog always seemed to be one of my stronger attributes.
Thank you as well! That means a lot!
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Hey, maybe we can collab on something some time, who knows? I too wrote fanfic in High school and (im still in my sophmore year in college, XD) so... Meh, I guess we're a bit alike in that respect. So did you plan this entire thing, with Haze, Mike, and Anther, even from the point where Haze died?
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Yes, actually. If I have enough time I plan to make a comic explaining the events that transpired back then.
A collab could be cool. I know I don't want to do event 5 on my own. I kinda wanna relax a bit after the mission is over.
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I think that would depend on what E5 is, first, But if we do, say... I'm not sure how we'd do it. You're a comic artist, and I'm a writer... Hmm.]
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Yeah, I feel the same. But it is possible for an artist and a writer to team up. You have seen the deviations where the story is written in the description right? It works.
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True... but with how I write and how short I see most people doing it, I'm afraid you'd have to draw like, thirty pictures D:
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Thus why I would want there to be a group of more than just two.
You write your stories long huh? Yeah, same here. ;D
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What do you average? I average twenty K words for a mission. :3
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Oh... I dunno... I only did event 4 in written form so far... You can get an idea of how much I write by checking that out if you want.
On my old fanfic, though, I think it got to a point where a chapter would be roughly 15000 words or so? I'm not 100% sure.
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Oh! what was the fic about?
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It's a PMD fanfic.
Go figure!
Ever since the first PMD games I've been a super freaking huge fan of it. I started the fanfic soon after it was released. But I left the fanfic hanging. It remains unfinished. After 5 years I kinda lost the motivation to do it and I wanted to move on to new things. (By then other ideas for stories had formed in my head.)
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All my fanfics are results of the unfinished -idea for new story- syndrome.
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At one point I was so determined to see it through to the end. Maybe one day I'll pick it up again... But... it is so out of date. I started it when gen 4 wasn't even out. That feels so long ago... -_-;
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AIEEE XD I had been secretly reading your comic but this page just blew me away. Awesome speech for Mike, and the delivery was well done with the broken glass effect depicting all the important connections in other teams. Also how awesome is that to see the whole of Tao Tree cameo'd in one comic? XD I'm so used to seeing Silver Fang and Bandit Bros that seeing the others just made me wriggle all happy X3 I love how Team Spark looks in your style!!!
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Oh! So glad to hear that! Then allow me to thank you for reading this so far.
Even though it was a lot of work to draw the Tao Tree group, I feel like it was a good choice.
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That's great to hear! The panels were probably the most difficult part to figure out!
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Glad to hear it! Now you know why I had to ask about Tommy. ;D
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Probably the best advice he's ever received in his life too...
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Mad. But a good kind of mad I think. Something that Anther kinda really needs right about now. ;D
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And the PokΓ©cademy award for most dramatic performance goes to... Mike the Charmander!
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Oh, but the show ain't over yet! There is another performer who might just top it. (maybe)
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Freakin' amazing! I love the shattered glass thing! It's really cool that there's a blizzard going on for the present teams, while those that aren't there have the empty background (I think). It really shows the separation, should Anther go through with his plan. And yes, with so many cameos, I'm very surprised that there are no Eevee or Riolu at all!
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Thanks!
Yeah, that's what I was going for as well, with the separation feeling. Thanks for the feedback.
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Wow, this page is epic!
I think Mike picked the right words.
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It actually took a while before I had something I was satisfied with (in terms of the script) so I'm glad to hear that!
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Some dialogue is hard to write, but this did hit the insecurities Anther had after what happened with Nikki.
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I just read all the parts in this mission. They are great!
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NO ANTHER. THAT'S NOT WHAT YOU WANT. LISTEN TO MIKE RIGHT NOW. JEEZUS YOU SILLY DEERLING.
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