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Published: 2010-07-24 05:15:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 809; Favourites: 10; Downloads: 0
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Moar pointing guns and angry punks.ANGRY.
Oh man why am I still awake.
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Distillum © Sarah Dill
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Ah, and there's punk #2, apparently the brains of the outfit (and dang, the gash he took to the face looks nasty!)
Looks like our heroes will get a chance to catch their breath, so that's a relief. I'm also enjoying the little mystery set up here: where'd these punks come from? Who paid them for what?
Keep up the good stuff!
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Whoa. Gun guy in panel one's pupils are tiny and I thought his eyes were closed/looking down. o_o Really like the alleyway in the last panel, though it could probably do with more smoodge (as Dove would say) on the ground and stuff.
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Ah, I see what you are saying and can see it now when I look at it right, it's like the old woman/young woman picture paradox... it doesn't look like that at full scale, interesting. If the lines were separated out a little more, a little more like panel three, it'd still read as just dark circles under the eyes.
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Yeah. I think it'd also help a little if the lines of his upper eye extended down a bit more, aaaaalmost connecting with the lower eye.
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...And the plot thickens, just when I thought it'd calm down.
...I am so excite.
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