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feather-queen [2011-07-19 09:53:17 +0000 UTC]
Lovely.
ther faces are both like,Gtfo fangirls.>:U
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marukusanagi [2011-07-10 21:30:59 +0000 UTC]
*nosebleed*
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KyokoFinland [2008-12-20 14:52:37 +0000 UTC]
Now, where should I start? First of all, I love how you’ve done the tattoo in a way the text forms a heart, which the arrow then pierces—I don’t know why I like it so. The shadowing is overall nicely done and seems to be in the right places, but of course it could be finished with even stronger shade, too. The anatomy is on the whole drawn well, but there are few parts that are off: firstly, the right eye of the black-haired guy (Ulquiorra?)—it actually wouldn’t be visible in this position of the head. The left one is fine and I like the way you’ve drawn the lashes. Secondly, the arm of the same character is overly lengthy—as I’ve said, the rule is that the area where wrist ends and the palm starts is somewhere around where is the top of the shoulder. As for the fingers, the upper two are ok, but the bottom ones seem bit wrong. The shine of the hair isn’t going logically; it’s a bit difficult to advise with this, but the shine follows, not only the direction where the light hits the hair, but also the direction of the sole strands of the hair and the overall shape of the hair. As for the other guy (Grimmjow?), I don’t have any other place that’d seem incorrect besides the ear that’s too small.
Keep on practicing, you’re developing well and steadily! Take care and have a nice day!
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KyokoFinland In reply to SashiSama [2008-12-26 12:00:01 +0000 UTC]
What has greatly helped me in order of understanding the anatomy and the shadowing is drawing real people, from photographs and such. It’s really enlightening and I can recommend it 100%. You’ll need a lot of patience and practice, but it’s totally worth it.
Please don’t get me wrong, the way you do the skin colour doesn’t bother me at all (there’d be no reason for that); the only thing I meant you could be using a stronger shade with was the tone’s strength in the shadowing. It is very possible that you’ll eventually start doing it so, when you grow more confident about the shadow’s “nature”. Even though I must say that it’s fine too, to use very light shades in the works; it can look tender and delicate at its best, and I like that style as well, it’s lovely to see.
You’re welcome, I’d be glad if I could help you with these comments.
Happy Holidays for you too!
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