Comments: 17
Dark-Avenger-001 [2005-09-23 10:34:14 +0000 UTC]
alsome, nice detail! keep it up
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Flayr [2005-09-22 17:20:13 +0000 UTC]
It's very beautiful
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VictorHaratani [2005-09-22 09:18:39 +0000 UTC]
DrunkenSanta got a point, your drawing is wonderful, u rock, and u know that, but you have to develop a lil the facial proportions and perspective, it's just a lil thingy that will make yours drawings even more goddamn awesome, man!
be fuckin proud of it! hell yeah!
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Savion In reply to VictorHaratani [2005-09-22 13:16:08 +0000 UTC]
I agree it could use some tweeking but it was pretty quick, and I tried messing with the eye for the perspective and it never looked right to me.
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VictorHaratani In reply to Savion [2005-09-23 10:19:33 +0000 UTC]
i know how it is, it always happens to me, eyes are a huge problem sometimes...
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purplerose [2005-09-22 05:05:59 +0000 UTC]
Nice job, I really like the hair.
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DrunkenSanta [2005-09-22 03:07:55 +0000 UTC]
Eh, I like it, but I see one or two things that seem a little off,mostly dealing with perceived depth.
Her right eye looks to me as being the same distance from the viewer as her left, which, judging by the way the face is outlined, is not the case. I think this is a mixture of the eyes being drawn as almos mirrors of each othe, or maybe because something of a difference between the two is lost in the heavy lashes. Changing the coloring of one might make it stand further in front or back, as might tweaking the outline a smidge. Not that I could do any better, mind you.
My other nitpick is that the lighting on the face and hair to me don't seem to match. The hair suggests a light source closer to being behind her, while the face suggest a light source well in front of her. This to me skews perspective a bit. I think the easiest thing to do would be moving the shadow to our right.
It is still a fine piece as it is now, though. Were it mine, I'd be proud.
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SanchezisFine [2005-09-22 02:07:52 +0000 UTC]
Looks amazing. There's somethng about her mouth though... Too small, maybe? Dunno.
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akai-kamisori [2005-09-22 02:05:46 +0000 UTC]
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*gapes at it
i love it, especially how u made the signs on her face so soft looking
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