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scar is scaring me the way he says "there is no need to chumvi" O-O
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What a meanie! Scar's so mean to Chumvi! What a lazy father! At least Chumvi seems to be thinking about the situation a little... Poor boy... He reminds me a bit of a cute mouse at the top of the page. Hehe, adorable!
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At least Chumvi cares about the future >.>
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"There is no need to, Chumvi".... because I'm going to push you off a cliff for disappointing me, so you have no future.
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"That there is less water in the waterhole, tooβ
βItβs the dry season, what do they expect? Of course there is less water than usual, and of course some herds have moved to other pastures. They will return soon. They always do.β
βAnd if they donβt?
βIn our lands anymoreβ
βI donβt understand what youβre worried about anyway.β
βNo. I donβt.β
βDisturb meβ
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Chumvi is a cute teenager!
One grammar mistake I picked up in this one, first panel, Scar's speech, you can take out the 'more'. "Of course the water becomes less' is how the line should read, the more in there is not needed
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Thanks for continuing to share your totally awesome comic with your fans
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I like now that you have whiskers on males or I had never noticed them before
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Scar's going to kill him isn't he? Damn it.
I was just looking at your old style and comparing it to your style now and it's amazing the similarities and the differences. LOVE your work, as always.
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Chumvi looks so adult like in the last panel!! it makes me want to cuddle with him!! <3
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i love your comics i wait everyday to see what the next page is going to be its so cool!!!!!
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From the second and third panel, Chumvi's face looks much longer (partially because of perspective, I believe). It makes him look younger, and then older within the same strip.
-amused-
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This is a great dramatic scene, if the movie was 30 or 40 minutes more long, this type of scenes make the film even better.
Great development of Chumvi, he can be a great character, but it's obvious what his future be very sad and dark. Scar can be very smartand have a great personality but his bad temperament can make him a complet fool and a total jark.
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Try to replace Actual not to Actually No ;3 Btw loved this page,Chumvi is starting to get real.
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give her a break, shes german not english
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It was just a suggestion,besides it's a him and I'm not british as well.
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Actually, Savu may WANT critique on language to help him get better.
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But may NOT
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@treehugger
next time you say not to be rude to someone, you shouldnt
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"Well, during the last weeks I got many comments/notes that my english is really very bad and I got tired myself to explain that I am not a native english speaker (even if I sometimes wonder why people think that I am when my english is that bad...)
So I would appreciate it very much if you could tell/ teach me my typical mistakes...." Savu's exact words. Next time you go trolling on someone, please know the facts.
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-shrugs- No need to be rude, it was just an honest and helpful critique.
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him*
he's*
Savu is a boy.
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ya, i just right she a lot so its hard to not right it
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Savu is a boy and asked for help since he doesnt speak fluent english. please be nicer in the future critiques are a good thing and help artists become better. If they didnt want one they would have blocked posts/critiques.
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Don't worry for Savu by the way, in his previous comments he always appreciated grammar corrections.
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Chumvi, for all the love that is holy, DO NOT LISTEN TO HIM ON THIS ONE! You'll just be terribly disappointed when the future goes to shit. BE WORRIED ABOUT THE FUTURE!
BTW, just thought of this: where is Rafiki in all this? He's never mentioned XD I understand not adding him to the comic, but a mention would be okay imo
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Possibly off scene helping the Pridelanders keep their sanity. Bet he is the reason Nala, Tojo,and Malka aren't corrupted by Scar, The hyenas, and the Outlanders. Might be why Chumvi Seems to kept his innocence. And keeping Sarabi at peace.
While communicating with the great kings of the past. or he just being crazy.
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Hmmmm, I dunno, Scar. Maybe you should pay closer attention to these things besides leaving them on the back burner.... O.O
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so scar is going to let his pride live without food or water?what a selfish bastard at least Chumvi gives a damn about the members of the pride^
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Chumvi is such a handsome lion...Scar is just jealous...
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oh yes there is scar. chumvi dont deserves a father like him
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