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Published: 2007-06-29 23:56:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 124; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Oh what would a boy do,
Just to be with the girl,
Who’ll prove love true,
Who’ll set his heart awhirl.

How many mountains would he climb,
Just to see that special look in her eyes,
And how many words would he rhyme,
Just to see her face full of sweet surprise.

What are the thoughts that fill his mind,
As his fingertips caress her face,
What are the words he fails to find,
As his heart suddenly begins to race.

How can he describe the feeling,
That surges through him inside,
As the space between them is disappearing,
And their aching bodies collide.

His lips find hers,
She slowly looses control,
His mind fills with wonders,
Suddenly two halves are made whole.

In a moment he’ll live forever,
He thanks God for such a beauty,
For the chance just to be near her,
For being so indescribably happy.

Oh what would a boy do,
Just to be with the girl who’ll change his everything,
Just to be with you,
I’d do anything.
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Comments: 8

firefly14325 [2007-06-29 23:59:52 +0000 UTC]

That is an amazing poem. I LOVE IT!!!!

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SavvyManak In reply to firefly14325 [2007-06-30 02:49:14 +0000 UTC]

thank you!! I'm glad you like it

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wildx22 [2007-06-29 23:58:51 +0000 UTC]

this is beautiful

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SavvyManak In reply to wildx22 [2007-06-30 02:48:33 +0000 UTC]

thank you I'm glad you like it!

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affy [2007-06-29 23:58:24 +0000 UTC]

i like this it's clear and flows good nice work

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SavvyManak In reply to affy [2007-06-30 02:47:48 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much, I'm glad you appreciate it

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Rayza16 [2007-06-29 23:58:23 +0000 UTC]

This reminds me of someone special and what I'm going through in the next week to see her again.

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SavvyManak In reply to Rayza16 [2007-06-30 02:47:22 +0000 UTC]

sounds pretty great though

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