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scarredsodeep — Cosmically Uninspired
Published: 2007-08-09 14:37:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 117; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description We sit:
a hill lined with rusting train cars and the sunset,
tonic and a shot of thought of
you.

Boats beach themselves,
nothing and nowhere to be.
The best times of our lives are the in-betweens, but
we won’t know that
for another hundred years.

Your tongue was forked anyway—
all we did was split it in two.
This doesn’t stop me from being impressed
by how well you speak with a broken jaw.

For every car that passes, I wonder:
where they’re going and
if they really think it’s what’s important.

Listless, having spent the night in limbo
(the Holiday Inn was full),
I’m disappointed it’s too damp for your ash
to burn this bruising forest down.

What good’s a cigarette
without the inferno?

I’d rather be a disappointment
than nothing but
we’ve only been what
we always were.

Ducks die and the lake shivers,
the pearl reflection of your glass house
coalescent.
Tonight,
none of it’s helping any of us,
but we’ll all go through the motions,
pretending otherwise.
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Comments: 8

windfallsdelirium [2007-08-14 23:52:46 +0000 UTC]

I vote for of too, it creates an interesting image.. that works, I think, better together vs. separately.

Good one, either way.

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scarredsodeep In reply to windfallsdelirium [2007-08-17 01:02:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! The of is staying. And has lost the popular vote and its appeal as a word.

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KunoichiKaoru [2007-08-09 16:31:27 +0000 UTC]

Though I like all of it, especially the last stanza, this is my favorite: "shot of thought of
you."
Of.

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scarredsodeep In reply to KunoichiKaoru [2007-08-10 01:33:37 +0000 UTC]

I've decided on of as well.

Thank you, lovely.

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Ashen-Frin [2007-08-09 15:06:19 +0000 UTC]

and

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scarredsodeep In reply to Ashen-Frin [2007-08-10 01:33:56 +0000 UTC]

The hill and the train cars--that was real. We drove past it by random; they called it a trolley museum.

I thought of you.

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Ashen-Frin In reply to scarredsodeep [2007-08-15 03:24:33 +0000 UTC]

"of" is better

The rain outside... I could hear the car tires slide as they drove past, one after the other. The light from the lava lamp morphing on the cealing. My friends snoring snuggled beside me; the warmth of them.

I thought of this.
Thought of you.

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scarredsodeep In reply to Ashen-Frin [2007-08-17 01:00:48 +0000 UTC]

I think,
am thinking,
am being

of you.

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