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Published: 2005-05-05 22:38:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 128; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 7
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I would put this under sociopolitical, but honestly I don't think this is that deep. I just felt like writing something, so Utter Something is what comes out of my head after reading several short-short stories. It's short, therefore, and random. But I do enjoy it in a strange sort of way.Related content
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Wow.
this is a wondeful piece of art. this is beyond words(in praise i mean lol).
amazing.
it started with a good pace, quickly putting me in the trench with those two.
it ended well also, using sharp words that brought it to an ending appropriate for the kind of story it was. I appreciated it.
in the way of criticism, i have none.
i hate to sound like most people who take the time to comment, and all they write is how good a job youve done in a generally monotonous way...but i have no choice, as i have no other way of saying....that this is very good work indeed. keep it up.
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^_^ thank you so much! I don't mind if people leave criticism or not, I do like to keep the door open, though, for people who feel they need to. I like to think I take criticism fairly well--there are always things to improve. ^_^ But thank you so much for the fantastic comment, it made my day!
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^_^ thank you, this is what I get when I read too many short-short stories.
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^_^ hehe, thanks! ^_^
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^_^ heheh, thanks! ^_^
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This is a really nicely written piece. I also like the idea behind it... if I'm interpreting your message right.
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^_^ hehe, I'm sure you are. And thank you ^_^
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