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#fim #mlp #pen #pony #earthpony #traditionalart #watercolor #octaviamelody
Published: 2016-08-24 19:05:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 541; Favourites: 41; Downloads: 8
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The delicate half of the musical duo. Musical nuance, harmony and style.A semi-follow up toΒ scribblepwn3.deviantart.com/arβ¦
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Looks great although only the upper cutie mark would be visible and the bottom one would be tugged in, you can see too much of the bottom leg since she's laying on her side and the other leg is really off since it's practically broken.
And the body is a bit too long. *edit* forgot to say that the leg and butt are pretty much connected on a horse which is why you should draw the horse legs while keeping that in mind.
But besides that I really love the face and how you shaded the tail and hair, you are really good at defining form.
You just need to pay a little bit more attention to anatomy
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The legs were tricky, but I feel the bigger flaw with this one is the torso area though. It is too long, and that was apparent once I had already inked it unfortunately. By then, I figured I'd just keep going. xD
Thanks for the feedback though, I'm glad you have constructive criticism. I don't often get this kind of thing.
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No problem man, constantly sketching skeleton structures, gesture drawings and faces has gotten the better of me. Your drawings and that of other people help me to keep going.
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