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Published: 2004-11-04 05:05:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 3200; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 609
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Constructive critiques are highly appreciated.Really... I won't get mad.... maybe a little... nah nevermind I won't.
Tell me what you think already.
Oh really...
+favs don't hurt either ha ha
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yea this one is cool.. jst browsing DA for some cool abstract vector jiggory, i like this one more than the remix.. apart from the flow of the piece.. it always gets me, but its a matter of opinion, (spit it out) i like to design for the user/reader so from left to right... jst seems a tad unbalanced, the weight of the dark colours seem to defy graffiti.. really wicked style on all your pieces 2.. nice to c someone with 1page of gallery 2, i can tell that ya put alot into ya wrk.. not take the piss n wacking out 1minute jobs.
(that paragraph) = Slick wrk.. peace
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the simplicity of the eagle against the busy details are very nice in their contrast.
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thank you, but the eagle seems a bit out of place to me, I think if it were curvy instead of so sharp it would go better with the overall work
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very nice. I can't critique to much because I am a novice to vector. I would love to learn more.
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Doesn't matter if you're a novice, a humble critique is always appreciated. Arrogant asses who act like art owes them something are the critiques people couldn't care less about. So if you feel like you would have changed something, go right ahead and say it, just try to use the right words is all. Have at it brotha.
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Are arrows allowed to be this cool?
I think you may be breaking some fundamental rule there.
Neat.
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Haha, many thanks for that brotha.
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I don't like how tight together the blue circles are. I feel the eagle doesn't match. The shape and colour selection was very tasteful, however I feel you've done better.
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Thanks brotha, yeah, InDaRemix is the spawn of this work. I wasn't too happy about the piece so I remixed it.
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this is simply great!! i love this one..i gotta add this as my favz..
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this is really amazing, great work, can't say anything more about this, it's just great!
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You've already said more than enough, thank you much for the comment.
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Great, love the 3D effect on the arrows and the colors are very smooth on the work, like your style.
hug
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Thanks, appreciate the comment.
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lots of circles and arrows and drips, but it looks so good
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Thanks, I'm working on a remix of this one, hopefully it will be a bit more appealing to the eye color wise.
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Hopefully this is a bit more construtive for you [link]
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yeah I'm going to work on a remix of this piece. Sooner or later...
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drippy circles=awesome
shattered stuff in bg=more awesome
subtle scanlines=also, awesome, not too bold but there just enough to give the effect of something, that frankly is good
but my favorite part:
the arrows are 3 dimensional!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! perspective on those things is awesome
the plus signs are 3d too, but the arrows are what really stick out
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maybe if there was no eagle at all?
nice work..
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i would like it if it were just empty?
or maybe some shape more simple?
-)
cheers..
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honestly, I was hoping someone would say that from the get go, should I expand on the idea, or leave as is, with no focus symbol? You call it.
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did you get my comment?
interesting; i have sent one..
saying:
actually i prefer this one without something focused; i mean maybe some other shape or form that is a bit abstract; or nothing at all, just a white circle maybe?
but the deision is yours though the design is..
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Oh are you talking about the bird? If you are I was hoping someone would comment on that, do you think it should go? It started off as a design for a school t-shirt, hence the bird icon. I was indeed thinking of changing that. If that is what you are talking about.
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yes.. that bird actuallly annoyed me a bit <
though it's still your choice and i have the right to say so -)
i didn't like the bird -\
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I don't know if I already told you this, been kind of lost in confusion for awhile, but I am going to make a remix of this one, and yes no bird. Hoping to add more color and get kind of crazy with it, but it will probably be awhile till I finish it. I am not exactly the fastest of workers. haha, thanks for the honesty though.
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you're welcome -)
by the way,
today i was working on a friend's work from college,
his subject is 'molecular music' i mean his concept,
and he asked me for 3D help and it was real fun! -))
when it is finished, i may ask for a copy of the work from him and maybe put here; and that's the time your turn comes to comment
today is beautiful don't know why; i have mailed some friends and feel a bit strange -))
cheers..
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you know wotcha doin with your 2D, like this one alot
keep it coming
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wow! ItΒ΄s great! I really don't know if there's something to be "fixed"...nice work
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loving the symbol, but the other circles seem lacking as i stare at the piece for a long time. overall great, splatters have a great contrast going, trademark arrows good as expected.
how do you go about making your diagonal scanlines?
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Thanks for the comment brotha, I think I am going to try and revamp the arrows a bit for the next piece I make. Well I am going to try and get more colorful, so we'll see what happens.
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that is so cool m8 
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thanks m8, arrows are done with the pen tool in illustrator
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to be honest im quite sick of the circles/arrows/drips combination, but it seems to work together pretty well.
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i didnt mean that to sound so harsh, all i meant was that the circles + arrows + drips are so common, its kind of becoming over used/cliche. i dont mean to take anything away from ya, it still looks sweet
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aight then brotha, thanks for the clarification
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Looks good man, but I'd improve some more color.
I like the depth the 3d arrows give to it. Thats a nice element of yours.
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Thanks, and yeah, I am going to start to improve my color palette in my next piece. Thanks for the analysis.
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Nice one.
It goes well with your other works in a similar style
The thing that I think makes this look so solid is the way that you can't see any ends of any arrows - I don't really know why this makes the whole thing look particularly good, but it does
I also like the drips. They, along with the blueness, give a kind of sad overtone to the whole piece which fits nicely with the shattering fragments in the background. Nice work
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