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a corporate id i did for portfolio.i like the word cicatriz.
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grr - miss post --
Envelope:
Working I suppose, but I don't think that you really understand the cost of printing full bleed on an envelope. Not only have you massively elevated the cost, you have created a situation where you will need flats that must be folded then glued /post/ print to accomidate for the bleed - this makes you look costly in the eyes of a potential client.
Logo:
I don't see how this really ties in with that you're doing. In fact, what is it that you're doing? I can't tell. You're logo says nothing about the services that you offer or what you will be supplying to the client. In the end, your logo is in fact interesting, but it says nothing about who you are. I think that you may want to consider reworking from scratch.
Final:
From what I can tell, you're offering webdesign - that's what your package says to me, yet you downplay your website and mention no real-world address by which you may be contacted. This is a real no-no in the industry.
I hope that you take what I've said as constructive critsim - if not, then dont' bother posting to my page. If so, then please let me know, and we'll see if we can work togeather on getting you the best package possible to expose yourself.
In the end, I know it seems out of place with all of my other comments, but I do like this piece, or I would not have taken the time to put so much effort into critiquing it.
Ciao
./veganeater:
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it's about time someone actually critiqued my work on here, i'm so sick of the bullshit "that's cool" or "good work" crap. i'd rather take a bashing on every piece i put up then read the bullshit some people post.
right now i am drunk, tired as fuck, just walked in, haven't slept too much in the past two days, and honestly don't have a good response to your critique at the moment.
but for the record, i got offered a job tonight at the phila art directors club just on this piece (seriously), with all it's flaws.
a real response when i can think clearly.
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I'm glad to find someone who can actually take a real critique. I used to post a lot of design stuff on here, but recently I've been taking a lot of it down due to useless and stupid comments - no one ever has anything consructive to say other then 'cool'. I'm sorry if my critique came off as a bit harsh, that's just the way I am when it comes to that - you learn from those around you; I was taught by and work with Design Nazis.
I'm glad that it's working for you so well already, but I'm sure you could improve it and make it really work. I'm interested to see what come up if you do decided to expand on it.
Like I stated before, overall good piece, just needs polishing.
Looking forward to your reply in full.
Ciao
./veganeater:
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Feedback to ensue - if you don't like critisim, look away now.
Letterhead:
Overall, interesting. However, your logo takes up far too much space and is simply to large/prominent. Try scaling it back and reducing it's intensity. It's simply too large to be used practically atm. As this is a point that I don't really know much about - concerning your pieces - you should also be using pantone colours only.
Cards:
Where is your address? Why is your website so small and on the other side? Heiarchy is all over the place and not all in sync here. Redo from scratch, it's simply not working.
Envelope:
Working I suppose, but I don't think that you really understand the cost of printing full bl
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