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PepsiFizzlesCola [2012-08-15 20:38:21 +0000 UTC]
I really like it so far!
But, just wondering, why does China have two last names? Or did you intend for Wang to be part of his first name?
And on the first paragraph of the second page, is it supposed to say sidekick? Or did you mean psychic?
Sorry...I'll stop correcting grammar mistakes now...it's a habit...
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sevenbunnyboyz In reply to PepsiFizzlesCola [2012-08-16 06:38:08 +0000 UTC]
Hehe, thank you~ :3 I'm working on something that can be a continuation for this, please wait for it~
China's human name is indeed Wang Yao in what I read on the net, and my friend who learned Chinese said Wang and Yao is usually used for last name, not the first name. So I created a... fictional first name for him, it's Li :") I think it's the most common family name in China.
YES, IT SHOULD BE PSYCHIC. I'm so dumb, I wrote it like that since the two words heard almost same. I'm sorry for that!
And it's completely okay for correcting the mistakes in the story, I don't really know how well is my English either :"))
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sevenbunnyboyz In reply to PepsiFizzlesCola [2012-08-16 13:00:28 +0000 UTC]
Y-Yeah, I searched on the internet and Wang is actually the most common family name in China... but well yeah, it's okay :")
Thank you again~ <3
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Supaninja635 [2012-08-15 00:55:11 +0000 UTC]
I love it! Please continue!
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PastaaaLover [2012-08-14 23:57:12 +0000 UTC]
love it so far!
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samirawrr-19 [2012-08-14 14:52:19 +0000 UTC]
This is intriguing so far - I can't wait to see where it goes. [:
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sevenbunnyboyz In reply to samirawrr-19 [2012-08-14 17:18:01 +0000 UTC]
Whoa, thanks for reviewing~ :3
I hope I can continue it well :")
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