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Published: 2011-10-10 03:33:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 1762; Favourites: 53; Downloads: 11
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Description True beauty

You take one look at me
And call me fat
And ugly.
You look down
On someone
Just because
They're gay.
You beat up
The really smart
Kids in your class
And then demand them
To finish your homework
When you should've finished it
Yesterday.
You see a kid
With autism
And call them a retard
And put them down,
Even though they're
People too.
You look at yourself in the mirror,
Or look at your muscles,
Not caring that you're
Living a life of vanity
And selfishness.
The sad thing is,
You don't realize
That maybe the
Smart kids
Who do your homework
Everyday
Will become your boss.
Maybe the gay kid
You beat up
Will become
A world-famous
Author or poet.
That autism kid
You called a retard,
Might end up
As a famous
Scientist
Who figured out
How to end
World hunger.
And maybe
I'll
Become that
Doctor
Who might
Save your
Life.
And your beauty,
Won't be there forever.
Or those muscles
You love and
Are so proud of
Will die
And leave you
Weak.
For true beauty
Doesn't come
From what
Clothes you're
Wearing,
Or that hairstyle
Of yours.
True beauty comes
Within.
Those who are
Kind,
Brilliant,
Empathetic,
Sympathetic,
And all those
Nice qualities
In between,
Are truly beautiful.
Maybe not on the outside,
But on the inside
Where it counts.
Those who bully,
And those who
Are vain,
Aren't truly beautiful,
Or handsome,
For they are ugly
And vile.
So sever
That nasty,
Rotten chain,
That keeps you
From revealing
Your true self.
For true beauty,
Is of the
Heart,
Soul,
And
Mind.
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Comments: 82

ShadowedLove97 In reply to ??? [2014-09-05 20:35:17 +0000 UTC]

Ah thank you c:

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IzzyD1995 [2014-03-22 11:59:12 +0000 UTC]

This poem moved me. It touched my heart.

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MeiCreepypasta [2014-03-16 04:00:05 +0000 UTC]

I love it

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Rosanna24 [2013-09-08 10:04:21 +0000 UTC]

I have felt like this. I have always wanted to say this aloud.

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Tanglestar1 [2013-05-01 12:48:16 +0000 UTC]

i love this!

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ShadowedLove97 In reply to Tanglestar1 [2013-05-02 19:14:19 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you like it.c:

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Tanglestar1 In reply to ShadowedLove97 [2013-05-03 00:27:56 +0000 UTC]

how did you do that btw?

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ShadowedLove97 In reply to Tanglestar1 [2013-05-03 00:31:07 +0000 UTC]

The font/formatting?

I used < font face="" > (without spaces of course and enter the name of your font in the quotation marks) and then used < tt > to put it back to regular font.

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Tanglestar1 In reply to ShadowedLove97 [2013-05-24 11:45:42 +0000 UTC]

thx!

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ShadowedLove97 In reply to Tanglestar1 [2013-05-24 19:40:39 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.c:

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A-Smiling-Madness [2013-03-11 19:27:42 +0000 UTC]

I have a freind who definetly isnt a 'retard' but has a disability of some sorts (im to akward to ask) she needs help with her work and she has to wear a medical bracelet. She is also very pretty, but others dont see that. She is honestly one of the greatest people ive ever had the luck to know, and unfortunatly we dont have any classes together but i always feel as though i should look out for her. Whenever someone tells a dirty joke i tell her to cover her ears, whenever someone gives her a weird look when she brushes her teeth in the girls toilet i just glare back, so what if her mum wants her to have good teeth.So what if shes a little hard to understand, just hang around a little longer and shes easy to understand.

Her name is Ella, and she is honestly one of the best and most beautiful people ive ever known, inside and out.

And im afraid, that with highschool around the corner.......im going to lose her.

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ShadowedLove97 In reply to A-Smiling-Madness [2013-03-12 21:07:19 +0000 UTC]

Just keep being her friend no matter what. Cherish her and tell her that's she's a great person, a wonderful friend and pretty no matter what others say. Love her no matter what.

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gumigirl [2012-09-28 23:17:20 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful. You have a way with words. <3

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ShadowedLove97 In reply to gumigirl [2012-09-29 01:37:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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gumigirl In reply to ShadowedLove97 [2012-09-29 02:41:52 +0000 UTC]

np! X3 also, is your avvie Cry? ;o;

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ShadowedLove97 In reply to gumigirl [2012-09-29 02:43:00 +0000 UTC]

Heh, yeah.^^ It's a free one too.=3 (I'm too lazy to make my own. lol)

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gumigirl In reply to ShadowedLove97 [2012-10-02 02:08:14 +0000 UTC]

XD i know that feel. and cry is epic.

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HinataHyugaKonoha [2012-03-25 18:54:07 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful poem...

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ShadowedLove97 In reply to HinataHyugaKonoha [2012-03-25 19:06:46 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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StrangeCanine [2012-03-06 16:57:24 +0000 UTC]

Really amazing poem I love it alot <3 Good work

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ShadowedLove97 In reply to StrangeCanine [2012-03-06 21:03:23 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.^^

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YourBuddyBill [2012-03-06 13:58:26 +0000 UTC]

Yeah...
Fold it into a paper airplane and throw it at them. That's what I did with my Paper Airplane of Shut Up. XD

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ShadowedLove97 In reply to YourBuddyBill [2012-03-06 21:06:27 +0000 UTC]

lol I should try that someday.

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YourBuddyBill In reply to ShadowedLove97 [2012-03-06 21:56:21 +0000 UTC]

Yup XD

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FicticiousAnimation [2012-03-06 04:37:09 +0000 UTC]

This is the single greatest thing I have ever read in my life.
Sure Jules Verne is good, but does he ever leave his own fantasy world and take a step into what's actually happening? No.

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onlyforyou123 [2012-03-06 03:42:40 +0000 UTC]

Amazing(:

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ShadowedLove97 In reply to onlyforyou123 [2012-03-06 03:51:33 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.^^

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Anuksut [2012-03-06 03:38:44 +0000 UTC]

Very nice job ^^ How did you get the font to stay like that??

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ShadowedLove97 In reply to Anuksut [2012-03-06 03:51:20 +0000 UTC]

I used the font tag: < font face="" > (without spaces of course and enter the name of your font in the quotation marks) and then used < tt > to put it back to regular font. Did that make sense? Sorry if it didn't, I'm not the best at explaining things.

And thank you.^^

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Anuksut In reply to ShadowedLove97 [2012-03-06 03:58:18 +0000 UTC]

that's amazing! Are you into, like, web programming and stuff?

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ShadowedLove97 In reply to Anuksut [2012-03-06 04:11:08 +0000 UTC]

A little. More like a minor interest of mine.

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Anuksut In reply to ShadowedLove97 [2012-03-06 05:14:39 +0000 UTC]

That's very cool ^^

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Lovelorne [2012-02-23 11:23:08 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing! I don't really know what else to say!

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ShadowedLove97 In reply to Lovelorne [2012-02-23 17:18:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!^^ I'm glad you like it.

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bvdphoto [2012-02-04 14:38:46 +0000 UTC]

hey this is really powerful and evocative. Hey I know this sounds lame and all, but it really and truly does get better. please keep strong . you have my support .

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ShadowedLove97 In reply to bvdphoto [2012-02-04 16:16:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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bvdphoto In reply to ShadowedLove97 [2012-02-04 18:40:44 +0000 UTC]

ur welcome

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TheAwesomeMeerkat [2011-12-19 02:46:12 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful I especially like the part where the bullied kids end up in a higher position than the bully.
Wonder how you got the formatting in - I'm curious to know how you preserved all those different fonts when you uploaded the poem.

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ShadowedLove97 In reply to TheAwesomeMeerkat [2011-12-19 02:54:30 +0000 UTC]

Well, I had to actually use this sort of formatting You put the font you want in between thee two quotation marks. It was not the easiest or enjoyable tasks, but the results were worth it.^^

And thanks. I think that, even if a bully doesn't realize it, the people they're picking on probably will have a better future. Whether it be getting a higher position in the same job as the bully or having a good job but a life of happiness with a family, whereas the bully might be a CEO of some company but be a very lonely person, I believe that the bullied will end up having a better quality of life in the future. Unless they're apart of the mortality rates of suicide 'caused by bullying. But that fact is for a different anti-bullying poem I'm writing.

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TheAwesomeMeerkat In reply to ShadowedLove97 [2011-12-19 03:06:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the code ^_^
I agree that the bullied have a better chance of having a better life later on. I kept telling myself when my classmates picked on me in middle school that one day I'd have the satisfaction of going up to a restaurant and seeing the former bully asking politely to take my order. >.< But if the bully realizes the full weight of his/her ways and mends them before it gets too serious, he/she could have just as good a life as his/her former targets.
I'm curious to see your other poem I'm going to go check it out.

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ShadowedLove97 In reply to TheAwesomeMeerkat [2011-12-19 03:21:47 +0000 UTC]

It's not finished yet, but if you'd like, I can send you the link when it is.^^

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massacare-girl-tash [2011-12-14 00:55:28 +0000 UTC]

i really love this! and i know exactly what your saying

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ShadowedLove97 In reply to massacare-girl-tash [2011-12-14 01:27:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.^^ I'm glad you like it.

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massacare-girl-tash In reply to ShadowedLove97 [2011-12-14 10:01:33 +0000 UTC]

no prob

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silentcamellia [2011-12-13 23:40:43 +0000 UTC]

inspiring and truly amazing!!!

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ShadowedLove97 In reply to silentcamellia [2011-12-14 00:43:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.^^

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Deadamisa [2011-12-13 23:34:25 +0000 UTC]

Well said! ^,^

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ShadowedLove97 In reply to Deadamisa [2011-12-14 00:45:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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DeviantHarriet [2011-10-21 09:35:01 +0000 UTC]

wow this was truly touching, it was very well written i am sorry to hear that you were bullied i hope its ended, but when you find your true friends youll never look back,true beauty is from the inside and lasts forever ^^
congrats

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ShadowedLove97 In reply to DeviantHarriet [2011-10-21 14:39:27 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.^^ I'm not exactly sure if the bullying has stopped. If it hasn't, they're bullying me behind my back. But luckily I have friends to help me through it.^^

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