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Hawkvirgin [2015-01-27 00:33:57 +0000 UTC]
So sweet
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pilgrim45 [2015-01-26 23:51:53 +0000 UTC]
Fantastic and very atmospheric
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badass-doctor [2014-11-24 00:40:47 +0000 UTC]
It's wonderful!
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AmyYang [2014-08-05 02:34:21 +0000 UTC]
beautiful work <3
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Observer14 [2014-08-03 19:21:34 +0000 UTC]
I love the way you have integrated the creature (not exactly a deer) into the woods (not sure where one ends and the other begins), along with the tiny figure of the forest, and the deep bond of love between the two.
As pearwood said, perhaps neither one is the "wandering spirit" but rather the merging of the two into one. Perhaps they are simply two different reflections of the same spirit?
Beautifully done!
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pearwood [2014-08-02 14:43:55 +0000 UTC]
Very fine, Laura. I like the way neither the title nor verse make it clear whether four-legs or two-legs is the speaker, or whether four-legs is huge or two-legs is a tiny sprite.
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