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Published: 2009-08-07 11:14:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 1207; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 28
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Description Sweet Maiden
Coffin of glass
Slumbering under the apple boughs,
Waiting for the one
Who will wake you with his kiss.
How I long to be that one--
To set my lips against yours
And gaze into your open eyes...
but...
....what if I'm not the one?
What if my touch
Leaves you cold and unmoving?
That would be too terrible to bear
I'm much too scared of that reality
To take the chance...
So instead
I gaze down at your perfect face
I take the bite that seals my fate
My eyelids fall
Darkness closes in
And I slowly slip away
Into a dreamland where we will be together
....always together...

Angsty poetry time! This is my entry for s contest.

I think the instrumental piece "Dearly Beloved--reprise" from Kingdom Hearts goes really well with this picture...


Please comment and critique to help me improve!



Medium: Watercolours
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Comments: 20

kazukidavid [2009-08-25 08:20:35 +0000 UTC]

i really like this one too!!!.....( oooppppsss!!!im out of time here got to go!!!!)

maybe next time im online ...ill try to critic more to your masterpiece.....^_^...hihihihihi....

i wish i wanna meet you up someday...and try to have some of your originals....^_^

bye for now....^_^

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She-Walks-Into-Doors In reply to kazukidavid [2009-08-25 09:27:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^^ I'm sure we can meet up someday

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BlauHase [2009-08-11 01:44:49 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow, I love her outfit, and the trees are awesome. your so talented with watercolors

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She-Walks-Into-Doors In reply to BlauHase [2009-08-11 06:39:17 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! There's so much to leeeeearn...practicing is hard xD I'm much happier with theese trees than the last one I did ^^ Her outfit is based on one of the super-cute dresses from [link]

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Bunny-chan15 [2009-08-11 01:42:12 +0000 UTC]

Just love how u did the background

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She-Walks-Into-Doors In reply to Bunny-chan15 [2009-08-11 06:31:52 +0000 UTC]

Truly? Thankyou! ^w^

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Bunny-chan15 In reply to She-Walks-Into-Doors [2009-08-11 10:53:45 +0000 UTC]

Ur welcome and yes truly~!

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SneakyShiki [2009-08-08 23:07:21 +0000 UTC]

aawwwwwwwwwwwww I Love it!!!!! >< bravo!!!! nice work on both poem and art. They totally fit together in perfect harmony...... great!!!

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She-Walks-Into-Doors In reply to SneakyShiki [2009-08-09 06:08:15 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou!! ^w^

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alicethedamned [2009-08-08 06:30:36 +0000 UTC]

is very beautifully done. i love it
faves +

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She-Walks-Into-Doors In reply to alicethedamned [2009-08-09 06:14:49 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou! ^^

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Jimmydastooge [2009-08-08 00:10:33 +0000 UTC]

i see what you did there >.>

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She-Walks-Into-Doors In reply to Jimmydastooge [2009-08-08 02:54:43 +0000 UTC]

lol

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Jimmydastooge In reply to She-Walks-Into-Doors [2009-08-08 05:27:45 +0000 UTC]

bu allseriousness, this is really cool ^_^

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hamsterchan27 [2009-08-07 19:08:30 +0000 UTC]

OMG Dearly Beloved WOULD go well with this. Lol Snow White much?

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She-Walks-Into-Doors In reply to hamsterchan27 [2009-08-08 02:55:43 +0000 UTC]

Prince rocks up. "Omg, I'm so hungry after all my traveling! Oh looks, apples!! : D" *om nom nom*

xD

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hamsterchan27 In reply to She-Walks-Into-Doors [2009-08-08 18:59:43 +0000 UTC]

XD

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eggtime [2009-08-07 18:19:30 +0000 UTC]

wow...nice work

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She-Walks-Into-Doors In reply to eggtime [2009-08-08 03:10:37 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou ^^ I like your sketches

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eggtime In reply to She-Walks-Into-Doors [2009-08-08 08:43:38 +0000 UTC]

thanx

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