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Published: 2014-12-12 07:00:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 21975; Favourites: 430; Downloads: 273
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I decided to make a set of stories called Tales of the Sugarcube Corner. Mostly, as FiM is basing around Twilight, this set will be about my little Eri. This is to tell more about her, weaving her story carefully into the Ponyville's life without harming the main plot or any other possibly existing fictions. Although, as I mentioned before, I keep it canon S1 as I considerΒ  it the most stable and sane part of FiM. But, of course, it's the time after the "Best Night Ever". Maybe a few crosses with S2, we'll see.

This here is a kind of a prologue, a start. Hope it's not too short, I tried to not be boring.

The comic assumes several things. Some hints for stories to be told in future parts. Also... Eri has been living in Ponyville for some time already. She met many ponies in the Sugarcube corner, relaxing in the evening with a cup of hot cocoa, and some ponies just naturally around the town. She's gotten her warm "welcome" from Pinkie. She doesn't cross path with the "Mane 6" very often, as she is pretty shy and these girls are always into some crazy action, saving the world.

So it's a late daytime, Eri joins Lyra and Rose who listen to Pinkie telling something you already know. Β  Pinkie is curious to hear something too. As Eri tells about her hometown, more ponies come around, confusing the poor filly with unexpected audience. You can spot Berryshine, AJ, Rainbow and Fluttershy, Cheerilee and Twilight. As the stories go on, the night comes, many ponies have gone home (Fluttershy must be scared to go back when it's dark and grabs Dashie to keep her company ). Dunno about you but after I finished this I got an urge to watch the episodes again.

Surely, all the ponies have stories to tell one such evening at the Sugarcube Corner. So it's only natural to share. ^__^ If it goes well, there'll be more about Eri's CM, her mouse, her scarf, her academy years and much more.

Hope you guys like it. Tell me if it's inconvenient to read such a fusion of pages or if it doesn't load right. For longer stories I'd upload 10-columns, it's a bit wasteful to upload page by page, even though it would be fun to make my uploads counter spin like crazy. Some people do put many pages in one column like that, I don't know...

And... I don't think I'd color it all, it would take a month. Yep. Lazy artist.

14.12.14 edit. Wow! Thanks EQD folks. That was sweet, didn't think you'd share a comic. ^__^'
Now I feel like I really have to go on with this. I hope nothing happens to stop me. Next weekend.

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Weak and Small 1
Reflection 1
Wild Duck Chase 1
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Comments: 97

Docard [2023-09-19 20:17:07 +0000 UTC]

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Animatorsnake [2015-09-14 23:08:50 +0000 UTC]

This is a pretty interesting comic, and i like the drawing style you got going

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xxxMakixxx [2015-09-12 18:46:15 +0000 UTC]

It promises to be great! Nice comic!

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flutter-butter55678 [2015-03-31 18:51:45 +0000 UTC]

this art is amazing. my drawings are like crap compared to this.

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sherwoodwhisper In reply to flutter-butter55678 [2015-04-01 23:21:47 +0000 UTC]

Don't say that. You gotta love what you create, this way you learn. My art has tons of flaws, too.

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flutter-butter55678 In reply to sherwoodwhisper [2015-04-02 23:18:46 +0000 UTC]

yeah.... i can't do shading! WHY

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sherwoodwhisper In reply to flutter-butter55678 [2015-04-08 20:25:51 +0000 UTC]

I dunno. Why?

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flutter-butter55678 In reply to sherwoodwhisper [2015-04-08 20:43:31 +0000 UTC]

IDK. I just end up smudging it with my finger. I mostly do only simple doodles of HTTYD, Minecraft, and MLP.

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sherwoodwhisper In reply to flutter-butter55678 [2015-04-10 20:49:10 +0000 UTC]

I guess it means you use a soft pencil. H and 2H are nice, they stay on paper just fine. Also, when I add shading I move from upper left corner to bottom right (yep, I'm right handed) to not mess it up, carefully keeping my hand motionless where it touches the picture. And when it's necessary, just put another paper under your hand to preserve the lines. Quite simple, right?

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flutter-butter55678 In reply to sherwoodwhisper [2015-04-12 00:02:23 +0000 UTC]

right.... i have not thought of the paper under hand method....

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Exovare [2014-12-25 04:45:50 +0000 UTC]

Wow, that's amazing.

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templar127 [2014-12-20 13:52:49 +0000 UTC]

Oh WOW! I love the art style!

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ChaosDrgon [2014-12-17 17:37:46 +0000 UTC]

I love the art, I do, but the delivery of that back story was cringe inducing. She went from answering one question, straight into a monologue that answered a bunch of other questions nobody had even asked yet. It stopped being a conversation and turned into a recitation.Β 

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sherwoodwhisper In reply to ChaosDrgon [2014-12-17 19:30:37 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I was afraid it could be the case. Maybe too short. How else would it go, though, without turning from recitation to questioning? And... as an excuse I could say I didn't plan it as a real comic from the beginning, I only thought about giving some background to the character and then ended up where I am - must think of a plot, a good balance, must seek conflicts and stay "within the lines"... And all for a first time comic. But you're right, of course. Thanks.

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ChaosDrgon In reply to sherwoodwhisper [2014-12-18 19:08:23 +0000 UTC]

Hidden by Owner

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sherwoodwhisper In reply to ChaosDrgon [2014-12-18 22:45:31 +0000 UTC]

Hidden by Commenter

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ChaosDrgon In reply to sherwoodwhisper [2014-12-19 16:32:42 +0000 UTC]

Don't worry, you'll get it. Just keep working at it.

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Raph13th [2014-12-17 06:14:47 +0000 UTC]

Thats was very nice.

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BroStar964 [2014-12-16 10:28:30 +0000 UTC]

Quality artwork, & a good storyline. Am folloowing this

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whoeveriam0iam14222 [2014-12-15 15:19:48 +0000 UTC]

I'm not really interested in comics but your art is so gorgeous

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sphynn [2014-12-15 15:09:04 +0000 UTC]

I think I like it better uncolored. Β It changes the feel of the story. Β I know I'm reading too much into it, but the grayscale goes well with her sense of loneliness from being an outsider in a new place. Β It's a cliche, but I think it could be nice to gradually introduce color (maybe one character or location at a time) as she begins to feel more comfortable and a sense of belonging in her new home. Β Either way, a good start to a new story.

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sherwoodwhisper In reply to sphynn [2014-12-15 17:05:57 +0000 UTC]

It could work. I guess I don't plan it that deep yet, it's my first comic.

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sphynn In reply to sherwoodwhisper [2014-12-19 02:45:15 +0000 UTC]

No worries, I'm sure it will be great however it goes... as long as you are happy with what you are doing then it will be worth reading. Β Good start, and I hope for more, eventually (no pressure, inspiration comes when it wants, and even then sometimes life gets in the way, but once in a while I would like to see more of this comic.)

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Element0fKindness [2014-12-15 03:06:07 +0000 UTC]

Wow!Β  Got yourself an instant follower.Β Β  Incredible job!Β  The expressions are beyond magnificent!

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fotland42 [2014-12-15 00:52:11 +0000 UTC]

A bit of constructive criticism: you should take care to make familiar characters quickly recognizable when they are first introduced into the story, unless the point is for the identity to be a surprise of course. When you're making an uncolored comic about ponies, this is a requirement that you should be actively keeping in mind, because color is the primary cue for distinguishing ponies, and you don't get to use it. In this case, I wasn't sure that Lyra was Lyra until I read the author's comments; I think that what was throwing me off was that you drew Lyra's mane as being a single solid color, not two. So my advice is that if you're not going to provide an alternate strong cue (e.g. showing the cutie mark or having somepony refer to the new pony by name), and the reader is to determine the identity by a holistic look at the pony's appearance, you should check carefully that you don't omit any details of that appearance that would reasonably be visible, at least in the first couple of panels including the character.

I don't know if most people are bothered as much as I am by not being sure if they can identify a character, but either way clarity is a good habit to form. And you're already doing pretty well; Rose was easily recognizable just as a head. I want to make sure you focus some effort on further improving this valuable skill.

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sherwoodwhisper In reply to fotland42 [2014-12-15 01:11:48 +0000 UTC]

Stroke by stroke, sketching it together.
Deadline looms, don't you know the watcher's always right?
Even if my pencil choice was perfect, gotta get them all done by tonight...
Fotland, it was meant to be more simple, Lyra is a tale for 'nother night.

I'm drawing them together!~

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Mike-Rosoft [2014-12-14 21:29:11 +0000 UTC]

Nicely done!

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MLPegasis4898 [2014-12-14 20:29:52 +0000 UTC]

Sounds interesting! Love your art style, by the way! It's wonderful!

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sherwoodwhisper In reply to MLPegasis4898 [2014-12-14 21:31:10 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Nevel7 [2014-12-14 18:12:58 +0000 UTC]

I really enjoyed this comic and I'm looking forward to learning more about Eri. She seems like the kinda character I'd want to know. Β 

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sherwoodwhisper In reply to Nevel7 [2014-12-14 19:23:49 +0000 UTC]

It's much fun to tell the story as well. ^__^

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sweetymimy22 [2014-12-14 17:55:52 +0000 UTC]

is this a Kind of Comic or something

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bugsydor [2014-12-14 17:32:20 +0000 UTC]

Have to say I love your art style. It's so cleanly done, and it's just different enough from show style to make it unique. Your storytelling skills aren't bad, either.

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sherwoodwhisper In reply to bugsydor [2014-12-14 19:21:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I daydream a lot

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Wolfbane3333 [2014-12-14 16:31:22 +0000 UTC]

I would watch a movie about your OC in that rainy town. It's an interesting setting.

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tigreanpony [2014-12-14 14:09:38 +0000 UTC]

This was a very nice piece I look forward to seeing more.

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HunterBrony101 [2014-12-14 12:41:46 +0000 UTC]

Very nice.

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firecharge44371 [2014-12-14 11:35:35 +0000 UTC]

more!!!!

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Coolguy9000 [2014-12-14 11:20:26 +0000 UTC]

This is pretty nice.

I like the art style you use here, it's very well done and your use of shadows is also very good.

I can't wait to seeΒ more.

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JokerPony [2014-12-14 10:54:27 +0000 UTC]

I guess she wasn't expecting whole 3 season long lifestory about Twilight, simply asking this question xD
I love your style!~I may not be the fan of traditional artwork but it actually adds quite a lot of charm, also it really has nice lineart. Very good job on their faces and anatomy I know it's kinda tricky at times. The only thing I can complain is adding a bit more detail in Sugarcube corner's backgrounds, but I guess you keep it simple to not drag attention away from the characters. Overall, great job.

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sherwoodwhisper In reply to JokerPony [2014-12-14 11:19:27 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I'm sure all MLP artists face the same problem about the anatomy: the 3D-minding model looks great in terms of rules of simple forms, perspective and volume but the original has different style, 2D that isn't perfect for all kinds of expressions (but the existing ones are much more vivid), it takes a careful choice of angles. Balancing between is probably the hardest part for me, sometimes I fail.

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Zebugamer45 [2014-12-14 10:41:35 +0000 UTC]

Your art style is just wonderful!

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MajorLaughmaster [2014-12-14 10:40:09 +0000 UTC]

Wow the hand drawings are very nice!

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SVAndrei [2014-12-14 10:08:13 +0000 UTC]

Love your style. It's beautiful! I'll check back to see where this is going. Keep up the good work!

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MrUnimpressive [2014-12-14 07:12:10 +0000 UTC]

it is now 1:11 a.m. and i cant stop looking at this beautiful page.

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sherwoodwhisper In reply to MrUnimpressive [2014-12-14 07:22:41 +0000 UTC]

It'll be over when you wake up tomorrow

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MrUnimpressive In reply to sherwoodwhisper [2014-12-15 03:42:25 +0000 UTC]

but i didnt want to stop looking

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sherwoodwhisper In reply to MrUnimpressive [2014-12-15 04:44:24 +0000 UTC]

Okay, you may keep looking, I wont tell anyone

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smallsight [2014-12-14 06:34:36 +0000 UTC]

Your pencil art is beautiful, the story is very will-written, and you clearly deserved the EQD showcase (although I think Wheelz may be jumping the gun a little by pushing you to try to go pro). Β This definitely deserves encouragement to continue. Β Great job.

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sherwoodwhisper In reply to smallsight [2014-12-14 07:23:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a bunch. ^__^

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