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TowerCorp [2009-06-01 06:24:56 +0000 UTC]

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i hope you won't mind a little constructive critique on your work! [also i apologize in advance for my english!]

first thing i can notice in the picture is that the head is too small and long (the back of the head is more oval instead of round, if i make sense)
the chin should be shorter, as it almost reaches the clavicles, and maybe the neck should be thinner too, unless she is really muscular.
the arms and general chest area is really well done and with a good anathomy, so there's nothing i can really sayabout it.
last thing, it looks like she doesn't have any ankles.
the colouring is made out of simple block colours, so i can't really critique it, but i'll say it works well.
the inking is very good, but a little uneven. the head is much lighter in inking compared to the torso and arms, and it shows, making the shoulders look more heavy.
the feets have the same problem, as the contrast with the dress inking is a little strong.
howerever, for the dress and "shirt", the folds are really well done yet simple, good job. e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" />

ok, end of my critique, i hope it will be useful for furute works e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" />

Tower

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careyline [2009-06-01 17:33:22 +0000 UTC]

Oh my thank you!! I love it!
would you like if I drew something for you?

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