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Published: 2003-12-14 17:09:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 109; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 40
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Description I hope the day will come
when you won't go away
By walking down the street
It won’t help with my day
I see you and dream
When I Dream it’s about you
See you coming toward me
Looking into my eyes
Telling me those words
Silently whispered.
Then putting your arms around me…
Holding me, kissing me…
I open my eyes.
See you are coming…
Seconds passed away…
And I know it was just a dream!
A Dream and my hope…
I will always hope
that you will come to me
Whisper to me -
I love you and always will!
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Comments: 36

drazhar [2003-12-23 21:06:19 +0000 UTC]

very nice poem.. i can almost relate with you on this.. but in different situations and all..

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ShiWave In reply to drazhar [2003-12-23 22:58:40 +0000 UTC]

hmm thanx...

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thezombie [2003-12-20 05:31:16 +0000 UTC]

insta

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ShiWave In reply to thezombie [2003-12-23 22:32:02 +0000 UTC]

thanx for really appreciated!

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AliP123 [2003-12-19 18:18:34 +0000 UTC]

Very nice poem!!! i love the way it all turned out to be a dream!! very nice!!

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ShiWave In reply to AliP123 [2003-12-23 22:25:17 +0000 UTC]

hehe..thank you very much....its just my hope, my dream...

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AliP123 In reply to ShiWave [2003-12-24 16:45:24 +0000 UTC]

...comes true.

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ShiWave In reply to AliP123 [2003-12-24 17:04:41 +0000 UTC]

hope once it all will come true.....

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AliP123 In reply to ShiWave [2003-12-24 17:17:24 +0000 UTC]

It will! I'll make it come true! *Shakes fist at dream*

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ShiWave In reply to AliP123 [2003-12-25 00:56:45 +0000 UTC]

heh...i waant to do it soo...but sometimes it is very hard to make dreams come true

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AliP123 In reply to ShiWave [2003-12-25 09:06:10 +0000 UTC]

Yes, with no help from friends sometimes heh? (Not refering to you)

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ShiWave In reply to AliP123 [2003-12-25 22:17:27 +0000 UTC]

its hard to do sometimes something without friends. but if you are not able to do something without them its not good, cause you may lose somebody and it will hurt so much..

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AliP123 In reply to ShiWave [2003-12-25 22:25:17 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I think we will all experiece that at least once in our lives.

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ShiWave In reply to AliP123 [2003-12-25 22:29:39 +0000 UTC]

yeah..thats true...

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AliP123 In reply to ShiWave [2003-12-25 22:41:07 +0000 UTC]

Very true.

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ShiWave In reply to AliP123 [2003-12-26 01:38:58 +0000 UTC]

yeah i think so

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designum [2003-12-17 18:59:50 +0000 UTC]

nice..

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ShiWave In reply to designum [2003-12-17 22:29:56 +0000 UTC]

thanx tomas

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gat3s317 [2003-12-16 02:16:13 +0000 UTC]

I like how you can put into words such feelings and dreams and hopes. This is really a nice poem.

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ShiWave In reply to gat3s317 [2003-12-16 09:30:37 +0000 UTC]

putting my feelings, dreams and hope to the lines helps me live my life without sadness. Cause i put it to lines, and im ok again.

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gat3s317 In reply to ShiWave [2003-12-16 14:06:57 +0000 UTC]

You're wise to know that. It's wonderful that you can do that, that it helps you, and is great for us to be able to share your thoughts.

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ShiWave In reply to gat3s317 [2003-12-16 14:09:19 +0000 UTC]

heh i think it is the best what can you do when you are sad. say it to somebody..talk about it...dont act you are alllright cause it doesnt help!

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love1008 [2003-12-15 18:07:11 +0000 UTC]

best wishes

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ShiWave In reply to love1008 [2003-12-15 18:11:30 +0000 UTC]

thanx! for you too

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love1008 In reply to ShiWave [2003-12-15 18:29:11 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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ShiWave In reply to love1008 [2003-12-15 18:30:42 +0000 UTC]

you are welcome

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FieryRavenOfPoi [2003-12-15 12:04:49 +0000 UTC]

wow..: o) great as usual...

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ShiWave In reply to FieryRavenOfPoi [2003-12-15 12:05:59 +0000 UTC]

oh! thanx

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FieryRavenOfPoi In reply to ShiWave [2003-12-15 12:39:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank yourself... You're the author, you're the one responsible for how good it turned out ; o)

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ShiWave In reply to FieryRavenOfPoi [2003-12-15 13:31:34 +0000 UTC]

heh thanx for that words

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soninha-place [2003-12-14 22:30:28 +0000 UTC]

Hope is the last sigh

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ShiWave In reply to soninha-place [2003-12-14 22:50:35 +0000 UTC]

sigh? whats that? i hope..its last time i think its dream

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darkchill [2003-12-14 18:31:25 +0000 UTC]

Awww very wonderful poem yet agian

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ShiWave In reply to darkchill [2003-12-14 18:38:19 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much! i really appreciate you comments and your friendship

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darkchill In reply to ShiWave [2003-12-14 18:51:00 +0000 UTC]

me to, your a great artist and friend

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ShiWave In reply to darkchill [2003-12-14 19:19:08 +0000 UTC]

heh thanx

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