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Shomia — My color
Published: 2005-09-24 20:06:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 1197; Favourites: 35; Downloads: 304
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This was a commission for one girl in Gaia :3She told me to draw her but it would be similiar like my drawing [link] (..so if anyone is wondering why i am kind of repeating myself xD)
I got to decide almost everything in this too
(I tried to make her look like herself so thus not so me-like facial features
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Painter 9
Photoshop for editing
Textures etc: [link] & [link]
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Comments: 52
Really beatiful as always ^^ you made hair so cooool *-*
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Her eyes are beautifully drawn. I like the dark blues and greens that you've colored this with. Wonderful drawing
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*Smiles* I will wait for the reply on this one. Heavy critique or just nice comments?
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Eeeh xD i am quite afraid for the heavy crits *laugh* But i guess i need those too to improve my art 
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Ok. 
First off, the head is in a pose that just... looks off. Unnatural. People do not turn there head in this manner. Look how the head is slanted downward with the chin angled somewhat sideways to the rest of the face. Normally this wouldn't be to bad but you streched the chin to neck line way back, so it looks like she has a large head that is forced to be tilted foreward.
Love the hair here. I am very amazed at the change I see in your art here, your hair has definition, levels, styles, colors, arrangements. Its very real and very lifelike.
But back to face. the inner face from your shading seems to be sunken in, instead of arching out. This is one of the reasons a nose is so predominent on the face, from already natural leveling outward, before that zonker of a nose we all got pokes out far.
As another commenter said, the rose and outfit is very well done, with a good sheen and leveling to it. This is another area I see an incredible growth from you in. I salute you.
And finally, the things that catches me. Very few people have spider like hand/fingers that this women possesses. Her finger "feel" as if they are streched, are just mere bone. The hand seems a bit on the long side as well. Just saying its looks a bit unnatural. Fleshing it out, giving it a bit of plumpness would help elevate the problem, but it just seems to be streched out a bit.
And finally, what I am loving and seeing in your art is your BACKGROUNDS. I remember when I first started watching your work. They were fairly plain and simple, sometimes a bit distracting. Now however, this piece as an example, note the levels and subtley of it. Its blends and draws the eye where you wish it, and fades out as it helps the eye travel from left to right. This is superbly done.
Finally, want to send you to another artist I watch. [link] Does a wonderful job on anatomy. While you two are different styles in artwork, I think you two could greatly enhance each others work by learning and chatting with each other.
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But yes yes. It has been some time since you saw my art.. and i believe i have improved quite a lot during that time
I am also trying to improve my anatomy, because i got tired hearing those anatomy comments etc.. We´ll see if i improve with that then.(Because it seems that the only thing i am improving is my coloring)
And i was really wondering what was off with the nose 
And thanks for all the other tips/notes too
...hm, i´ll take a glance to that artist´s gallery then xD
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*Smiles* You know thats what I am here for. Good, was afraid it might have been tooo harsh.
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Blah, you can never get enough critique 
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*Chuckles and rubs hands together wickedly* whahaha. Ohh, you have not realized what you have unleashed.
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*Grins and continues to tap fingers together Mr. Burn's style.* ((Fear the simpsons))
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The texture look so cool XD
Very well done i love i t
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Thank you
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HOLYFUCK, Kajo.
This is AMAZING. Like,... wow. Just simply too beautiful for words. <3
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It isn´t THAT amazing, is it? O.o
Thank you n__n
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I thinks it ish, lmao. <3
But maybe that's because I just adore your art period. XD Either way though, it's still amazing~
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I really love the hair! They well done and detailed!
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Delicious n__n
I always love the way you draw lips && the way you shade. It's beautiful. <33
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Sure thing! && i'm diggin' the new user icon 
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Thankies xD altough i feel pretty lame since i only use eyes as my avatar >.>
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Ha, well, i like it && it's cool how the bottom right corner is like..branched off, if you know what i mean. Kinda like a puzzle. I would have no earthly clue how to make an icon
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Thank you n__n i love to work with the face most.
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Awesome. The shading is wonderful and I like the way you did her eyes. ^__^
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Vau, upeaa ^^ niinkuin aina. Loistava väritys, nuo hiukset ovat kovin aidon oloiset. Leuka on ehkä hitusen vinossa, mutta muutoin 
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Yritin saada hänet näyttämään itseltään joten leuka on todennäköisesti siitä peräisin xD ja kiitos taas favituksesta n__n
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Wonderful shading skills, though the amount of detail that you put into her face ande hair shames the rest of the piece
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Hmm i don´t know if that is a good or a bad thing, then xD thankies.
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constructive criticism is evil like that
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You did this very well! I especially like the eyes and flower.
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