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showna — My Breath Catches...

Published: 2005-08-24 18:50:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 1365; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 174
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Description best one I've done in awhile
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Comments: 7

frozen-lightning [2009-05-21 00:06:59 +0000 UTC]

I really like this one. Especially the last line. It's got a lot of feeling in it. Favorited~!

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preconceivednotion [2007-12-02 21:50:01 +0000 UTC]

i fucking love these things.... all of you visual poetry business... its really amazing...

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showna In reply to preconceivednotion [2007-12-04 18:38:10 +0000 UTC]

thank you I'm glad people read these.

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orleck [2005-08-27 07:19:12 +0000 UTC]

i think it is really well done placement to have put that second section (with all the text in the same font size), gives it good poignancy. bravo




take care

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phr3ak000000000 [2005-08-24 22:10:20 +0000 UTC]

my life as well. powerful. very well done.

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drakko [2005-08-24 22:07:37 +0000 UTC]

Very powerfull text... and then whoen you zoom in and out you lay a diferent kinds of subtext feelings...

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i-invented-roses [2005-08-24 19:11:00 +0000 UTC]

my life ^

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