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#girl #landscape #rocket
Published: 2018-03-26 00:19:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 882; Favourites: 143; Downloads: 13
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Done as a commission trade with another artist.. I know, technically the town should've been flattened, but you know. I'm lazy, so I didn't bother moving it.Related content
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this piece is really beautiful, kinda remids me of ''to the moon''
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Hello there, I'm from :devprojectcomment! and I'm here to comment on this beautiful landscape!
First and above all: this is a stunning piece. I am not able to manage light and colors so well. The composition is great with a focal point (the space rocket) both at a right place and enhanced with enough contrast, with a foreground almost black and things happening in the middleground.
I have quibbles, though. As much as I love the effect on the grass (being brushed by a low sun), it is not consistent with the light on the mountain suggesting the sun is very low and reddish, while the light on the grass is white-yellowish. At least the top of the mountain and the edge of the rocket smoke should get a less reddish light... I think. Or the grass a more reddish light ^^
Another quibble is the little character: she (he?) looks very small with a big head. Though I understand it is a child, she is still too short to mount her own bike. The bike seat should be the hight of her crotch.
Also, I don't understand what it is that is blurred on the foreground, blowing in the wind. Is it earth? Where does it come from? I'm sure there is a story behind it but this is not an obvious story while looking at the drawing. If the rocket produced a strong wind, the grass would be bent towards us and it is not so... I need more explanations about that.
Lastly, I think a better composition would be to lighten the background behind the character (either by moving her a bit up the hill or by painting more light down the mountain). This would provide some contrast and make this wonderful piece a more than wonderful piece! 
Have a nice day!
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Thank you so much for your feedback, it’s very appreciated. Yes, I do really need to fix many things in this piece (especially the lighting) and did think that the close hill that the girl is on was too far for the grass to be bent from the wind produced by the rocket. The blurry things are supposed to be grass..... but I should probably should have even more clear on that (haha whoops). It took a few times for the bike, but I guess it still looks very disproportionate. I did have problems with the lighting on the grass, since I couln’t do individual strands of light on the grass and couldn’t really just block in a section of light. I messed up there, the light was originally supposed to be orangish too . hmmm ... I’m still on my way to learning more about composition and how to paint digitally (I’m not getting a computer until the summer, and had to borrow one for spring break) and I have so much to learn! Thank you for taking your time to comment on this, it’s really appreciated. I’ll be sure to take in these factors next time
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Have a nice day, I hope you get a computer a be soon back to doing great artwork!
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Very Well Done Painting Sibih, I Really Love This One So Much, Keep It On, You're Amazing ;3.
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Very beautiful work! 
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Hi Sibihxe !!! I'm a new member of ProjectComment so that is where I found you.
I just wanted you to know that this is an amazing piece of art! I just finished watching an Anime called Outlaw Star. and this just fills my heart with happiness! I loved the show because of the thrill of adventure and the mystery of space. Your work just brought the hours I spent watching that show right back to me in an instant!
You have a nice smooth texture that I haven't seen much (so far) since I have been a member of Dev art.
The little girl looks as if she longs to know what is out there... perhaps one of her parents are on that flight??? Perhaps this could be seen in a darker light? maybe one of her best friends was on that ship? Maybe she missed the chance to say goodbye? 
I love the vegetation work you have done too! Foreign, but familiar at the same time.
The dusk, (or is it dawn?) shading is enrapturing on the side of the mountain and across the valley.
Also, was it your intention to give the sky the effect that the valley was sitting in a type of crater? either way that is a neat effect!
Anyways, this piece is going to my favorites file here on Deviant Art because it is truly a masterpiece in my eyes.
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aa thank you so much!! ;e; your art is totally cool too, and I checked out outlaw star! It seems so cool 
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Of course, you will see me! I might not always comment so grandly but I am always around somewhere appreciating the beauty that comes from within.
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You're too kind... honestly the people here are awesome!! ;a;
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I haven't had much experience with socializing on here yet, but those that I have talked to were really nice!
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I know, most of the people here are like that ^^
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I'm trying to be more social. lol
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Oh wow, this is really beautiful! I love looking at it
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From projectcomment!
This artwork is really awesome! It dragged me in very quickly when I saw because... I think it's the color scheme? Maybe. I will explain what I like and what I don't (even though there isn't anything to hate here) in these points:
Composition:
I first off love the angle this is coming in at. The colors are OMG so beautiful! Love them so much! Everything is clear even when the way it's painted isn't too detailed. It still feels detailed even then, which is something that I myself find hard to accomplish.
Idea:
The idea is one I love to see. This looks and breathes beautifully. It feels like I can reach in and feel the winds. The rocket soaring upward is quite neatly done, and the kid's anatomy is adorable. So beautiful.
The colors:
As I already mentioned, the colors here are amazingly well-done. And for these kinds of arts, color is soo important to make it feel alive. So, props on that! You did well on that too. The shading, lighting, and choice of colors is neat.
All in all, this drawing is so pretty. You really outdid yourself here. Great job, Sibihxe! You've earned a fav and a watch :3 Thanks for making such a great artwork! And I hope that one day you end up on the main page of dA
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wow! Thank you so much, (even though I don't think this piece is very good) I love your art too!! I couldn't really find the mountains the right lighting, but it turned out alright. Thanks for taking the time to comment on this, really appreciate it <3
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This art is absolutely stunning! The background is absolutely stunning . . . the foreground is beautiful . . . The smoke spire is absolutely beautiful. I love the feeling of this image is absolutely breathtaking. I even love how the debris seems to be floating right in front of the image.
If you managed to make this one a lazy day . . . I have no idea what to expect when you're inspired!.
Good work!
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aa thank you!! I'm so happy you like it!
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You're welcome and keep up the good work!
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you are welcome dear! ^^
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Thank you, still trying to improve
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I feel you. It may not be easy at all, but that doesn't mean you can't stop with what you're good at. So, keep up the good work with your skills! And your art too.
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I know, when I look at some other artists I feel like I can't ever catch up to them, and I probably can't - their's just looks so nice!!
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Don't worry about it.
Not sure if it will help but, I just thought I could lend you a hand with some advice. Just in case.
Instead of letting them make you feel down, make them an encouragement. Study each art you see. Learn from it, and practice with your style. That way, you will make some interesting results.
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That's what I'm (trying to be) doing right now
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This is just so beautifull, you have improved so much in so little time, that is something not very usual. I wish you the best of luck, you have a bright future ahead of you ^^
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Thanks, but I'm afraid my future paintings aren't going to live up to that expectation. I'm sure this just happened...
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Just be confident in your work and you will see good things will come ^^
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