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Published: 2004-03-22 23:58:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 30064; Favourites: 487; Downloads: 189
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We breathe heavily as we face each otherHearts at a race as the truth uncovers
Down my neck
Rolls a drop of sweat
As I realize just where we're at
Anxious yet nervous
Scared is not the word but,
What would happen if someone heard us
The thought quickly leaves
As you come even closer to me
My heart skips and I forget to breathe
A quarter inch from you
I can't run, why would I want to?
You know I want you, and I see what you want too
My arms slowly wrap around your waist
Your sweetness I prepare to taste
We tilt heads and our lips barely touch
Slowly part, then back again,
This time quenching tongue’s thirst for lust
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Comments: 126
This is very sweet and I can dream of its true reality of pleasure. Still, a bitter person might be disgusted by such fluttering romance. Drama is easy when you know it.
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I appreciate your commentary on this poem. It reflects my mixed appreciation well.
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Lol, my life... 'what if someone heard us'... perfect <3
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An amazing piece. Love is a beautiful thing, and this poem matches up with the exhilarating passion of love perfectly.
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wonderful. <3
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This is amazingly well written. It's managed to make almost free verse into something that sounds as good as the emotion it triggers. I love it!!
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really well writen i know where your coming from i loved it
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Lovely piece. I love the terrible, insatiable desire that seeps from this...
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oh my fuck
that is so well witten it seems unreal
it kinda makes you want to do it hey
wow
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I love the sense of hunger, almost like they're going back to completely devour eachother's souls.
The imagery is fantastic, and at the end of the day, all I can say is:
Wow.
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Oh that sounds so cool.. I love that feeling of that feeling that you kiss when ever you kiss someone.. It's great..
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To say this is beautiful or amazing would be a huge understatement. I am seriously at a loss for words.
♥
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This is so sweet, romantic and passionate! Very nice. The mood is strong but it's not too hevey you know?
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this is amasing, you can almost feel what they are thinking and feeling.. It's very good that you can discribe a (probaply short) moment so well, I love this peace
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Beautiful.
I love the way you rhyme but not obtrusively.
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