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Published: 2004-01-19 22:11:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 158; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 9
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my head is in this jarim trapped
a butterfly caught in a jar
delicate
fragile
easily broken
no one can save me
no one is trying
im suffocating
please poke holes
i cannot breathe
i have not enough strength
no escape plan available
if i could possably escape
the butterfly is free
to be caught again
the world is ignorant
when you open the jar
youll break my wing
torturing me
if only i could fly
all i see is a safe grave
a butterfly crushed
looking up at your shoe
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Comments: 11
Aww - I will be your savior . . . . I need a pet butterfly (lolz) . . .
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Maybe you could be a wormy thingy (albeit a damn sexy worm of course) and you're in a cocoon and you are just working your way through...
Bah. Maybe not. So much for Caiti's uplifting... ness...
The last two lines make me go 'sniff'.
Loves.
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I actually submitted this a long time ago. Just changed the prview.
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:/ Oh, sorry then... heh... yep... :akward pause:
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Oh no need to be sorry it wasnt anything wrong- just a comment i geuss. shrigs.
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awww thank you nate
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I like this a lot Katie. Heartfelt, and you made it flow in a very unconventional way. Very nice.
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thank you
i dont know but i like that i dont ryhme... whenever i try to it doesnt work right for what i write.
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