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StrawberryFields1967 [2007-01-19 22:43:33 +0000 UTC]
I found your page through the One Million Masterpiece and I'm glad I did. Your gallery is so unique and energetic.
Okay, so advanced critique: Everything looks nice, but the hair gets kind of faded near the ends and her left forearm looks a little longer than her right.
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xMiko-chanx [2006-12-28 01:23:50 +0000 UTC]
She looks really good! Sort of reminded me of Lenne from FF X-2. I love the way you drew her face =]
Keep up the good job~
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Sk-bluu In reply to xMiko-chanx [2006-12-28 01:46:48 +0000 UTC]
Thank you ~ ^_____^
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BaronMar [2006-12-28 01:23:15 +0000 UTC]
This would be better suited to a people.portraits rather than fantasy. I really like this piece, but it doesn't do what it should. It could be so nice and really amazing, but it falls short of that with just a few minor things. It just looks awkward, like look at her, all of her, there's something about her outlines and the lines that's just so.......not good. There's way too many white lines in the corset, you can reduce that by raising the tolerance thingy when you click between the lines. Redo some of those lines, and I think it will be MUCH MUCH better, a little more shading wouldn't hurt either. Good job though, just try to work on some of those little things.
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BaronMar In reply to Sk-bluu [2006-12-28 01:34:31 +0000 UTC]
When you have your lineart, you don't want to just paint everywhere, so you use the "magic wand tool" and at the top it'll say "Tolerance" And when you click in a white space if you have it set at 0, it will ONLY select the white space, but if you have it set to 45 or 70 or whatever, it'll select part of the grey areas as well. It's really handy if you want to colour inbetween the lines.
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