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Slygirl25 — Why do I hold back?

Published: 2007-02-26 00:08:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 474; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 1
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Description I was sitting here wrighting a poem 4 sly and when i was done i thought "i have to draw something for this!" so i did. my coloring is getting better. well anyway the poem was from Carmelita's point of veiw and you know how when she first sees sly they chat before they attack? well thats why its called "why do i hold back" heres the poem...(don't laugh at it!)

Why do I hold back,
On this trigger on my gun,
Why don't I just shoot,
Instead of watch him run?

Why do I hold back,
From throwing him in jail,
Why do I even pretend,
That I try or fail

Why do I hold back,
As I look into his eyes,
Why do I tell myself,
That all his words are lies

Why do I hold back,
When he kisses me on the cheek,
Why do I chase him around,
even though i feel so weak

Why do I hold back,
When i want to join his side,
How do I last without him,
Even after I have cried?

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Comments: 19

CarmelitaFan93 [2008-02-28 00:34:48 +0000 UTC]

Nice poem and pic if that's all right I would like to put it on my fav list

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Slygirl25 In reply to CarmelitaFan93 [2008-02-28 01:07:39 +0000 UTC]

tis definatly all right!

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FoxyR [2007-08-14 19:03:20 +0000 UTC]

Hehe Cute^^

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Slygirl25 In reply to FoxyR [2007-08-20 02:30:28 +0000 UTC]

thanx

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FoxyR In reply to Slygirl25 [2007-08-20 14:37:32 +0000 UTC]

Yer welkome^^ Pleaz check out my gallery some time

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Slygirl25 In reply to FoxyR [2007-08-20 14:50:06 +0000 UTC]

lol kay i'll go see now

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FoxyR In reply to Slygirl25 [2007-08-20 19:58:02 +0000 UTC]

Yer so nice thanx

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blue-raccoon [2007-04-10 19:38:31 +0000 UTC]

It's my favourite pic of yours,but I don't have a scanner so I'll put it in my faves when my mom buys me one

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Slygirl25 In reply to blue-raccoon [2007-04-10 19:42:41 +0000 UTC]

thank u very much! ur the first one that faved this over my secret lovers digital art, and i'd have to say i like this one better then that as well. and i can't wait till u get a scanner! i love meeting other sly fans

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FuckingMoon [2007-03-03 21:15:04 +0000 UTC]

I wouldn't laugh at your poem- even if it wasn't that good. But it was, at least in my opinion, very beautiful and fits the situation between Sly and Carmelita. I also like the way you've done the background of the picture, you've really been thinking what to draw.

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Slygirl25 In reply to FuckingMoon [2007-03-05 01:49:00 +0000 UTC]

wow thanks. im glad someone sees how hard i worked on this. I don't nrmally wright poems but when i do i like to post them glad someone saw them better then just "good"

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Sly-Cooper-Girl [2007-02-26 16:44:51 +0000 UTC]

i love ur poem

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Slygirl25 In reply to Sly-Cooper-Girl [2007-02-26 19:57:43 +0000 UTC]

thank u. it took me abut 30 minites just to wright it it took 2 days to draw and color my pic

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Sly-Cooper-Girl In reply to Slygirl25 [2007-02-26 22:10:11 +0000 UTC]

wow

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Rebecca-dragon-lover [2007-02-26 00:13:31 +0000 UTC]

verry creative i like it X3

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Slygirl25 In reply to Rebecca-dragon-lover [2007-02-26 00:36:18 +0000 UTC]

do u like the poem 2?

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Rebecca-dragon-lover In reply to Slygirl25 [2007-02-26 00:43:01 +0000 UTC]

OO YA i was talking about the drawing and the poem x3

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Slygirl25 In reply to Rebecca-dragon-lover [2007-02-26 02:08:33 +0000 UTC]

oh lol yay thank u. this is the best ive ever colored

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Rebecca-dragon-lover In reply to Slygirl25 [2007-02-26 12:27:06 +0000 UTC]

your welcome thats awsome i couldn't draw a bg like that

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