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smoov-ie — My Only Fear

Published: 2005-07-30 11:17:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 186; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 5
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Description I’m afraid to tell
You
How I feel
Because
Because I’m scared
Scared that you will feel the same way…
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Comments: 4

Mojimi [2005-07-31 23:53:28 +0000 UTC]

I think its just fine. The size of the poem doesnt matter its the use of words, i think you did a fine job.

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smoov-ie In reply to Mojimi [2005-08-01 12:13:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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lilrainbowjessi [2005-07-30 15:29:46 +0000 UTC]

Oh, i like it!
I can relate to it in some strange kind of way.

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smoov-ie In reply to lilrainbowjessi [2005-07-30 15:45:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank yew!

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