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w00t done! 0.0 took me forever.... hope you guys like... so think we're done with the prologue now
and yeah i nearly forgot... if you spot any mistakes bout my english in the comic TELL ME ill fix it
but you alredy know that 
EDIT: and yeah if anyones interested.. the doggies in the first panel are (from left to right) Josh, Chubbs on top of him Leyla and last but not least Bronco (ma friends doggie... don't kill me
)comments pleeeease! =^______________^=
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awww thank you!!! ^.^
umm... dunno ... a few hours? dunno really ... XD
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I like the graffiti, it adds to the mood of what's happening (he's astray!)
When the other dog says, "Sure!" I was confused. It sounded like he was answering a question, but no one asked him anything. Shiver only said, "No, I'm okay."
Maybe if you put, "Are you sure? Come this way..." That would have made more sense to me.
Very cute in the last panel - is "Brother" supposed to foreshadow that the two of them will become like brothers? Can't wait to find out!
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thank you a lot! yeah it's meant like... ermmm ... kind of well i wouln'd say sarcasm but something like that... "yeah...sure.. you're not tired at all" kind of thing ^^
not going to change this though as i'm redoing these pages anyway
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Awesome comic! I love the "Brother" in the background in the last panel, it adds a cute touch.
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I LOVE the last pannel! Please keep this up! Its very good!
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thank you a lot! i sure will
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This is totally one of the best comics on Deviantart (o.o I was about to type Youtube XD)
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aww really?you think? thank you a lot!
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aww i'v sen all ofmthem there gr8! well done on them
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I am LOVING this comic so far! 
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Aww, I all of this... I also love the anatomy...I just wanna sqeeze shiver! he's so cute
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your welcome I love all the shading, how do you do your shading?
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thanks! well theres nothing special about my shading. i simply take the base color and make it darker and color the places i think it looks good on
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yeah,
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i'm working on it! nearly done with the linearts!
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aw yay! ^^ I can't wait to find out what happens!
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i actually really like this comic.. this is my first time seeing it and i'm eager to see more!
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Is Lunn gonna be a sorta father-figure to Shiver? Anyway, cool page, will be looking forward to the next!
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lunns gonna be the overprotective brother ... the father figure to shiver... that's rather ince
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A cat the father figure to a dog? That's something you don't see every day... though I shouldn't talk, cause in my comic, a wolf-like being is gonna be the father figure of a horse
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