Gravija-Sunrise [2009-09-28 02:46:56 +0000 UTC]
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Very beautiful work! The play with warmer vs cooler colors directs attention to the focal point quite nicely. There is a great sense of depth, with the background dropping back as it should, while still maintaining connectivity to the foreground.
There is a bit of confusion in depth on the right side. Initially I saw the forest/vegetation as an overhanging cliff in the foreground, but after noticing the buildings underneath, seemingly in front, I'm not sure what to think.
Is it supposed to be in the background, farther away than the structures? If so, I think a slight reduction in chroma would help push it back.
I think it would work better as a foreground object, though--it makes the piece more inviting, as if you've just turned a corner, only to see this majestic castle nestled between two cliffs.
The other thing bothering me is the cropping at the bottom. With the castle's design, my eye keeps being drawn to the bottom and off of the canvas. The bit of light at the very bottom-center grabs too much attention. If you put your finger over it to cover it up, the focal point instantly becomes much stronger. See for yourself.
I really admire your architecture work and look forward to seeing more. Keep it up!
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