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hannxm [2017-06-22 14:32:22 +0000 UTC]
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I think this is a cool and sensual piece. I really like your line work and the detail in the clothing and hair. The proportions of the face are good and you haven't done a bad job of the hand. The painting is smooth and the colouring of her is really pleasant.
There are some issues with the proportions of her body however. She looks a little squashed. Her left arm is very short (the right is quite short too), her breast is quite high up, her neck seems a little thick and it looks like she has barely any torso. Her left leg looks larger than the other when it should be the other way around if the leg is on top and it's sunken into the bed a little. Where the legs taper off, it looks like her right leg is dropping off the bed behind her left leg, but her left leg appears like it's straight flat on a bed, if that makes sense. I feel like stretching out the canvas would fix a lot of the issues to be honest.
These issues can be overlooked quite easily though because of how nicely it's been drawn. You have talent and I think it's great you gave this pretty difficult pose/drawing a go!
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Soficathie In reply to hannxm [2017-06-25 14:54:41 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much for good feedback! I see that you mean, the upper leg is kinda supposed to be a little behind pushing the other forward, but it doesn't really show because the hips aren't rotated to emphasize that (I dodn't see that before you mentioned this)
I'll remember that for next time, thanks for the kind words, had this picture in my mind every time I listened to 505 so figured I had to draw it
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OrcheWood [2017-06-17 15:24:03 +0000 UTC]
The proportions are . Great Draw
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Soficathie In reply to OrcheWood [2017-06-18 20:43:24 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! glad you like it
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guny666 [2017-04-21 17:17:18 +0000 UTC]
sexy
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Soficathie In reply to guny666 [2017-04-21 17:23:07 +0000 UTC]
She's pretty cute, thanks for the watch ^^
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guny666 In reply to Soficathie [2017-04-21 18:09:11 +0000 UTC]
do more and would kindly do lesbian please
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Soficathie In reply to guny666 [2017-04-22 16:58:01 +0000 UTC]
I do take commissions if you're interested in requesting anything
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guny666 In reply to Soficathie [2017-04-22 18:58:01 +0000 UTC]
thanks for telling me and your offer
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