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Soldatoflife — Beyond the Bounds
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Published: 2012-06-09 05:11:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 209; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 4
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Moving forward in time not back,Searching the right path that will lead to success.
Reaching out the inner strength to go on no matter what,
Letting go of simple things that offer no comfort.
Taking in the little moments that bring joy,
Profit of these times to find force in desperate situations.
Fearing the darkness that shrouds the mind,
Unknown occasions that show no way out.
Denying help making oneself grow less and less,
Irritated by the world that revolves around you.
Isolation after desolation taking all your time,
Destroying your very being in doing so.
Hope remains in every crevice,
Justice will be served to those who respect themselves and others.
Believing in yourself without a moment of doubt,
Showing light in every corner that is your soul.
Helping yourself and opening yourself to the world,
Creating a bridge where you may return from...
May our paths remain bridged and well made.
May I make it beyond my limits and grow stronger.
May you find new bridges to hold onto.
May life bring hope to those who try.
May joy reach out in every heart.
May hope always be within all our thoughts forevermore…
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Comments: 3
Hehe
I especially like the harsh difference between stanza 2 and 3. Like a hard cut.
And the nice idea with the beginning of every line in a stanza.
A very nice poem, I have to say
I sometimes find it hard to keep pronouns out of my poem, so it really gets spammed with 'you', 'your' or others. And that sometimes kill the purpose. That's why I had to try to write one completely without speaking to the reader personally.
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Thank you for the comment fakefake114, and may you continue to work on your poetry so that I can appreciate your various experimentations
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Thank you
I will always try to get further into it.
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