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heroined [2015-01-10 14:19:04 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
I never know how to begin critique.
It's really nice, and it has drawn my attention at glance on the front page.
I am so much in love with the shading and the fur effect here, oh my! Anatomy also is pretty good and gentle stylization makes the picture look really nice.
Drawing itself isn't most original of all, but it's hard to to something very original when it comes to a headshot.
I love the shading and fur, as I've said before. I suck at both of those things and I have to admit I am jealous of your skills! I could suggest some more work on the chest stripes, seeing that they are pretty smooth, while the pawpad marking is fuzzy, but it's not a big flaw. Scars are done very nice, but the chelsea grin wound seems a bit underdeveloped. Blood is unshaded and overlaps stiches, while it should come fromunder the stiches. Also teeth are barely shaded and too bright- bone is always a bit yellowish. I really adore the way the tounge is done, especially the shape oh my god.
Background looks really good, even though it's very simple, and it composes well with the character
Over all, it's really nice drawing, very appealing to look at~
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SomberAid In reply to heroined [2015-01-10 14:23:34 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much for the critique, I will think of all that you've said for my next drawing were... I can use this, or I might just go ahead and edit it, as I yet have not closed sai so I have all the layers still~
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heroined In reply to SomberAid [2015-01-10 14:26:47 +0000 UTC]
No problem~
Hah, do whatever you wish, seeing results of both would be a pleasure uvu
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SomberAid In reply to heroined [2015-01-10 14:30:46 +0000 UTC]
oh and btw the main reason to why the stripes on his chest is just like some lines, it is becouse of the fact that he does have shorter fur on his chest, but I will fix it anyway as I do agree that it looks a bit weird.
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heroined In reply to SomberAid [2015-01-10 14:39:31 +0000 UTC]
He has shorter fur on chest? Seems a bit unpractical to me but whatever |D
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SomberAid In reply to heroined [2015-01-10 14:41:06 +0000 UTC]
heh well he is a maned wolf xD I will update his reference and make it more clear soon cx and yes that is quite unpractical but ohwelll... he is a demon... and he has some kind of ice powers so then he may be unpractical, eh? fixed it slightly now, does it look any better?
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heroined In reply to SomberAid [2015-01-10 14:43:02 +0000 UTC]
Much better now <3
I know the pain of having unpractical demon OCs. Asper has eyes on his thighs. Everyone keeps complaining about how short he would live if he really did and I'm all like "fuck off he's not even alive XDD"
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SomberAid In reply to heroined [2015-01-10 15:22:46 +0000 UTC]
that is indeed quite unpractical BUT HEY they're demons~ aswell as it is quite original with having the eyes there I think o3o cant recall seeing a character with eyes on their thighs xD
I might open a join.me soon, want to watch?
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heroined In reply to SomberAid [2015-01-10 15:25:57 +0000 UTC]
Asper is poor bby because all he sees is his forelegs XD
I also have Marten, she has eyes on her shoulders
You can find both if you are willing to dive into depths of my horrible gallery XD
Oh! Of course yes!
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SomberAid In reply to heroined [2015-01-10 15:31:46 +0000 UTC]
I did have a look at Asper, he has a nice design cx I will check up Marten in a second, I am guessing that having eyes on the shoulder is a bit more useful, infact both of them might be quite alright considering that they would easily see if they were attacked from the side, unlike other predators that mainly has their eyes on the front of their head to easily see forth.
join.me/240-916-846 btw when I host a join.me I the chat usualy lags a bit for me and makes it so that it is posted like... a minute after that I actualy posted it, just keep that in your mind xD incase I post and then you just said something so it seems really weird o3o
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aniwablue [2015-01-19 01:06:15 +0000 UTC]
Wow, that's beautiful! Scare but so well draw and inspiring...!
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aniwablue In reply to SomberAid [2015-01-30 01:54:06 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome! Have a good day!
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Criccket [2015-01-15 23:38:10 +0000 UTC]
The detail in the fur is awesome.. Nice work, yet again!!
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SomberAid In reply to Criccket [2015-01-16 16:30:12 +0000 UTC]
Thank you ^^ I am practicing with my fur texturing at the moment, so comments like these are very appreciated ^^
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Hantari [2015-01-11 07:07:48 +0000 UTC]
Creepy~ I love it )
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SomberAid In reply to Hantari [2015-01-13 15:26:27 +0000 UTC]
Thank you ^^ -abit late Dragon age/ps3 have slightly taken over my life-
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ska-i [2015-01-10 17:14:49 +0000 UTC]
awsome <3
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ska-i In reply to SomberAid [2015-01-10 17:21:49 +0000 UTC]
no problem :* :3
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SteinwayHusky [2015-01-10 16:49:58 +0000 UTC]
Typical me on a Monday.
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SteinwayHusky In reply to SomberAid [2015-01-10 17:01:42 +0000 UTC]
I take it you also know where I'm coming from.
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SomberAid In reply to SteinwayHusky [2015-01-10 17:21:45 +0000 UTC]
indeed I do, they are the days you dont want to come.
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SteinwayHusky In reply to SomberAid [2015-01-10 18:01:45 +0000 UTC]
I have to get up at five AM and usually sleep till nine on weekends.
But once I had some friends over and after being at work until 12:30 AM Friday night
and they thought it would be a brilliant idea to wake me up at five on Saturday morning.
They sure felt the breath of a demon alright!
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