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Published: 2009-10-09 04:48:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 608; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 0
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dedicated tohaha, no wonder I had never been getting views on this before. I had never added any keywords! xD; FAIL
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This one is definitely the best one. Not perfect, but still.
Composition appears a little bit tight in the lower part of the shot. So... The shot is not balanced well. Adding some space on the lower part would do good.
You can use LightRoom to crop by 1/3 Rule. That's helpful, and kind of teaches your eye to see those 1/3 lines as time goes by.
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When you say to add space, do you mean on the bottom only, or the bottom and right side? (Like if I had the crop square on the original photo, moving the square up a bit, or up And to the left a bit?)
I don't have LightRoom. Or CS4. I have Photoshop Elements, and Bridge. That's the best it gets for me. xD'
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Move the square down and left.
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Blerg, I've got myself all confuzzled.
I meant 'move the square down and right', but you think down and left would be better?
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Oops, I forgot to tell what I liked about this one. It uses light very well, and composition accents are well positioned with the help of DoF. Well done!
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Or not cropping, but moving the composition.**
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Haha, it's alright.
Thanks.
(So does that mean that this one would be a Yes for the gallery? XP)
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An accomplished composition with some great tones which give a strong sense of life and vitality. Good stuff, without doubt.
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