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Published: 2012-08-18 02:15:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 853; Favourites: 53; Downloads: 59
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Soo... as the title pretty much explains, this is Leafpool! Bet you people couldn't have guessed THAT one! xDDD Anyways- I know I've been pretty inactive lately, but with my swimming season starting up again, and school just a couple days away, I'm actually quite busy lDAlso my first critique... I'd like to know what people have to say- AND I PROMISE I WON'T GET too ANGRY AT NEGATIVE COMMENTS
lD//EDIT: Maybe it's just me, but at the regular zoom, the picture looks a little blurry, so I recommend zooming in once to get the sharper image. But as I said, it may just be me~ lD
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Cons: The first thing that strikes me as odd is the very thin lineart. I understand that chunky lineart looks wrong, but I would define her inner features a little more. Next is the massive back legs. The should be much lower on the body, and have more of a curvature feature. The ears also bug me. They should be more thin and round, and also closer to the top of her head instead of angled all the way down. The background could use a little more detail than just stars, as well as the grass. For future reference I would use various colors and shades on the grass instead of just like, two. The last thing is the Lack of shading and a light source. If it's night time then Leafpool would have some dark blue shading, also there should be a light source somewhere in the picture to define where the shading should be. Here it looks like you just used the burn and dodge tools. Oh, one last thing. You should lower the nose and the mouth so they are actually near each other. OH sorry didn't notice this before but her shoulders are a little too stiff, if she is sitting like that then her shoulders should be more relaxed.
Pros: I really like the markings you gave Leafpool, very lovely. I also like how you did the tail. It seems you know quite well how the shape of a cats tail is, that they're never stiff. You can clearly see Leafpool's mood/emotion by the way you did her eyes, so kudos to you for that.
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First of all- thank you for your detailed critique, I can see you actually took some time on this~
The thin lineart is just the way I roll lD I actually traced over the sketch with a thicker brush, but decided on the thinner one because for me, I thought it looked better- but I understand what you mean
Anyways- thanks for the great critique!
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Her eyes are so beautiful and expressive...I love it! :3
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tis amazing twinsie! we should do another collab!
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I WOULD TOTALLY DO ANOTHER COLLAB. BECAUSE WE'RE JUST THAT AWESOME : D
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we should! it should be a warriors collab of our fave warrior or an anthro ravensongs XD
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what about if we did some sort of scene from warriors? i suck at anthro lD (even though I never tried it xDDDD)
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sure ^w^ we could do.......idk sumthing XD
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OOOH DAT SOUNDS LIKE A GREAAT IDEA!!! xDDDDD
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YUSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD we could do leafpool and crowfeather on the cliff
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ALKJDBALKSJBDVLKSJBDVVSKL YESSSSSS!!!! OHMYGODYESILLTOTALLYDOTHATOHMYGOD! xDDD
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yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyy!
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She's sad because she knows she will always be that annoying runty outcast that betrayed everyone and brought ThunderClan down to their knees.
AND I HATE HER.
This is an awesome drawing though 
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We've been through this countless times
Of course you like it >:3
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I'm just refreshing your memory U_U
It's a shame such talent is wasted on Leafpool...Why don't you do some Breezepelt fanart for a change? xDD
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Don't worry. It's most definitely..... refreshed. xD
Actually, I think I will!
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xD I have F5ed your brain.
Yay
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Psht, You haven't F5'ed anything
Whadya think? idiot! xD
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Well I just F5ed this page! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH
DON'T CALL ME AN IDIOT BEETCH! I AM OF A VERY HIGH INTELLECT I'LL HAVE YOU KNOW!
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Do you even know what your IQ is?
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Well it depends whether you're talking about the American or British test. I was much higher on the American one, no surprise there, despite the fact I have no frickin' clue how much a 'nickel' is :I
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A nickel is obviously worth 5 cents!
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Why do you even have a different word for it? Is '5 cents' really that hard to say?
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Pfft. Like I know. Don't you guys have shillings or something?
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Bah ha ha haaaaa xDDD That was like the currency used a hundred years ago or something xD I don't even know what a shilling is. Right now, we have pence and pounds. EASY.
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SHEEP LAUGH! DIEEEEEEEE!
Ahhh, pence and pound. I knew it was something along those lines! lD
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OMG WHY YOU MAKE ME LAUGH SO MUCH?!?? GAWSH LEARN SOME RESPECT!
You know it means we say like, that'll be 50 pee xDD (except we write it 50p obviously)
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BECAUSE THT SHEEP LAUGH OF YOURS IS WHAT KEEPS ME GOIN'!
Ha. Nice.
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THAT. Should be made into a song.
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I'LL TOTALLY CONVERT IT ON SONGIFY!
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But it needs to be your magical singing voice that does it Wow I make myself laugh sometimes! BAH HA HA!
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Well, use yours! I dont have time to share my beauty with the rest of the world!
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And you think I do? Being this amazing takes up time!
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Well- you just don't have any beauty to share, sweetie...
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Slightly off topic but I'll take the bait anyway.
YOU WHORE-FACED-BITCH-SKET! YOU MONG I HATE YOU YOU'RE FUGLY!!!
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..... w-what? I THOUGHT YOU LOVED ME!
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HOW COULD I LOVE SUCH A DISGUSTING CREATURE?!
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I think you have it wrong- we're talking about ME here... not some disgusting creature, silly!
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I think the two aren't mutually exclusive...
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I think you have the wrong definition of mutually exclusive!
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Ah, and you exude your education by licking your nose?
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