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Published: 2007-08-23 06:53:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 648; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 0
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Description It is a dark day

The clouds have claimed the sky

Blocking the warm rays of sunshine

They collide with the ocean

Making the horizon impossible to see



I see her from a ways off

She is dressed in black

Walking slowly toward

The edge of the icy water



I stare in wonder

At this lonesome being

And I can’t help but wanting

To know what she is thinking

To know why she came here



I walk toward her

Curious about what she is doing

And when I get close

She looked at me

Her eyes filled with amazement



“Can you believe how big it is?”

She asked me

I shook my head and smiled

The ocean often took my breath away as well

-Poem by Sara
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Comments: 15

ashleysolo [2008-07-22 08:45:37 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh! Favorite!

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aangelaa [2007-12-19 20:37:26 +0000 UTC]

wow!!! i love the composition and colors

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thekillerduckII [2007-08-27 01:05:35 +0000 UTC]

i love the atmostphere

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Kujita [2007-08-24 11:11:34 +0000 UTC]

Actually this photo reminds me not the begining, but the begining of the end.

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scotty0390 [2007-08-24 03:32:29 +0000 UTC]

Wooo! That's an Awesome picture Erin!

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SoraBelle In reply to scotty0390 [2007-08-24 04:42:05 +0000 UTC]

You're awesome Scott!

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scotty0390 In reply to SoraBelle [2007-08-26 08:19:34 +0000 UTC]

Too bad i'm not as awesome as you are!

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SoraBelle In reply to scotty0390 [2007-08-26 20:20:59 +0000 UTC]

True true...

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PaintedHouse [2007-08-23 22:39:15 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow! This is awesome! It looks as if the horizon could go on and on forever. Beautiful colors!

Great shot!

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SoraBelle In reply to PaintedHouse [2007-08-23 22:42:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!

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DeborahKay [2007-08-23 16:54:00 +0000 UTC]

Good job, the colors are just great!!!

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SoraBelle In reply to DeborahKay [2007-08-23 17:31:34 +0000 UTC]

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SoraBelle In reply to DeborahKay [2007-08-23 17:31:27 +0000 UTC]

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JSacramento [2007-08-23 09:20:41 +0000 UTC]

Very nice shot, great timing!

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McKenzie-James [2007-08-23 07:44:34 +0000 UTC]

wow, the lower clouds appear like a massive wave... great effect contrast could be a little more tho, u need more blacks and whites and less grey areas... otherwise nice shot!!!

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