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Published: 2008-02-11 20:03:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 113; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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i had exams this week which is why this is so late in being put up.... next page soon ^^constructive critiscism much appreciated
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very good job, 30min examining it...i am ecomending you to tokyo pop
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the scanner killed it >.< all that shading.... ruined thanks ^^
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i'm experimenting with the designs on each one ^^
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Shading's great. It gives it a real manga-like feel. I love the simplicity of the whole thing. Tons of detail would be too busy, in my opinion. But I agree with the comment above, work on bringing the head back a bit and it'll be perfect. That's my only cc. Nice job, otherwise ^_-
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i was aiming for a sorta mangaish look, glad it worked ^^ yeah i know not my best work ¬¬ ..... i kinda just wanted to have it done at that point X)
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Lol, I can totally understand >< My comic is a little sloppy at some pages...
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i love this woman =]
all i can say it yooh need to work on connecting the head to the neck a lil bit like its good but it looks like shes stretching her neck out a bit, dunno if thats intensional or not liek XD and a comment to teh 1st person comment well not to him but yer, i like the second one the simpleness makes it clear and not to clouded by detail maybe a bit of shadeing needed but no detail i think it would complacated it to much.
xx
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lolz thankies ^^ it meant to be like she looking up so it supposed to be sorta like that as for the shading the scanner killed it
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I really like this, it has a nice mood to it
If I shall give you any constructive critisism , I would perhaps like some more detail on the top picture to the right,
otherwise,
impressive
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yeah i thought about it but in the end i was lazy X)
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