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Sorien5 — Chibi England
Published: 2011-03-28 00:54:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 369; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 0
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I got the Outline from HeartlessCortney (thanks!)
I colored it w SAI
It's my first true digi art, so please, be kind yet give constructive criticism!
HETALIA~!
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Comments: 20
AWWWWWWWWWW ENGLAND IS SOOOOOOO CUUUUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Thanks, I guess? I wasn't really trying to shade in this piece. I was mainly trying to just color it. I was experimenting with the watercolor brush, so it kind of looks like shading in the hair region when I really wasn't intending it to be like that.
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This is adorable! I like how you colored the eyes and hair, they look really nice together. I just wouldn't suggest coloring OVER the eyebrows.
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Thank you! Your comment means a lot!
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Hmm, a bit of shading would help. Good job, though.
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Are you sure you want the ConCrit, Parnita? Cuz I will do a thorough job of that.
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If you're going to go all OMGGG IT'S ARTHURRRRR~! YOU FAIL! Or Go all Ziwei Bluntness on me, I'd rather not....
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(ack, had it all typed up and then hit F5 for some reason. Crap.)
BTW, Angela was shocked that you would actually draw this. Though she's not going to look at it-Romano has abandoned dA to haunt Pixiv. Which, frankly, pwns dA.
Actually, I use the term AZN TROLLING cuz, well...Ziwei's one person. This is ConCrit. But it's good for you-like giving you a humility factor, deflating your ego bubble, improving the quality of your artwork...the list goes on.
1. remove the watermark. To be blunt, it extremely fucks up the overall image. Screw the watermark-as long as you know that your signature is on there, somewhere (and it's at a good place w/ digital art), then you'll be A-OKAY. I mean, kirui nee-san (my sister...she's on dA too) has A-MAH-ZING artwork for Hetalia and the other fandoms, but she doesn't use watermarks. And I don't, cuz of the former reason.
2. Your in-between-eye length. Is too long. Look, the width between the eyes = one eye, in retrospect.
3. Ears. Yes, I know that this is a chibi. But no, this does not give you carte blanche to screw the whole, overall proportions. Make them up a tad more,etc, and they're good to go lD
4. he could use a bit more color in his eyes...
5. This is just a stylistic choice, but YOU DO NOT GIVE THE VIEWER THE IMAGE THAT LOOKS AS IF HE/SHE/IT IS IN UR FACE. Take my drawing of Primo, and think about it.
6. Is it just me, or does England's face look lopsided? /sarcasm
7. Nice eyebrows, I'll give you that. /smile. Expression=okay. He looks...really...tsundere. Lol.
Parnita, take the ConCrit that I'm spewing when I could actually be sleeping (yo, 2:20 AM when posted). I wouldn't be doing this if you really weren't my friend, y'know? This is to HELP YOU. Not to flame.
Does this help?
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Yeah, what Grace said!
Use blur/airbrush.
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I didn't draw this! Grace...I colored it.......were you too asleep to notice that? OK, I'll take the COLORING suggestions; this is my first.
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*shrugs* I saw trolls popping up at the screen while I was posting it. So, yeah.
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Talk to me on gmail about this.
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And plus, you could do some symbol or something. No excuses. And also, he looks as if he has skin spot (thingy). So? You can just use Google Chrome to translate and everything.
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Also, I DON'T HAVE MY SIG ON THAT SO I HAD TO DO THE WATERMARK!
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