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Published: 2012-08-26 12:53:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 3594; Favourites: 190; Downloads: 0
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Aftermath: something that results or follows from an event, especially one of a disastrous or unfortunate nature; consequence: the aftermath of war; the aftermath of the flood
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tkorber [2012-08-26 17:21:50 +0000 UTC]

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Nice work Sortvind, in my humble opinion I would try the following changes. Crop out the left third of the shot, to me that side competes for the eyes attention with the main leaf. I think you'll still achieve the rule of thirds with the main stem and tips of both leaves etc. I love the hues, they remind me of the copper metal roses that some artists sculpt. But it still works great in the square crop because the hues are more catching then the subject. Again just my humble opinion and a different point of view. Well done.

TK

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Sortvind In reply to tkorber [2012-08-26 18:08:01 +0000 UTC]

thank you for the in depth feedback

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tkorber In reply to Sortvind [2012-08-26 21:50:30 +0000 UTC]

You are most welcome. I hope some of it made sense but than again, you know what they say, beauty is in the eye of the beholder and what may look good to one person may not to another. I love your macros, keep em coming.

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Sortvind In reply to tkorber [2012-08-27 14:08:11 +0000 UTC]

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solefield [2012-12-27 00:48:21 +0000 UTC]

Featured in my journal: [link]

Thank you!

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sunnydayriot9 [2012-12-06 09:54:07 +0000 UTC]

absolutely gorgeous colours... I love the sharp / jaggedness of the leaves

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seeinglight [2012-10-30 21:51:04 +0000 UTC]

Featured! [link]

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solefield [2012-10-13 16:54:59 +0000 UTC]

Ooh, love the colors!

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gelamou [2012-08-28 19:13:08 +0000 UTC]

This is a gorgeous photograph! Well done! I love everything about it.

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ChussMontealegre [2012-08-26 16:38:30 +0000 UTC]

Love the colors

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teyasaveleva [2012-08-26 13:40:45 +0000 UTC]

It's beautiful

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davincipoppalag [2012-08-26 13:30:51 +0000 UTC]

beautiful

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