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VengefulPhoenix [2016-04-25 22:01:24 +0000 UTC]
This is a really good animation. I've done a bit of animation so I might be able to give you a few tips.
First, when the girl is walking out onto the stage, you could make that smoother. One way I'd suggest is not making the knees bend back as much. I think one of the reasons it looks a bit chunky is because knees don't move like that.
Another thing you could do also with walking, is make her foot come down smoother. All you'd have to do is add some more frames.
Other than those two things, this is a very good animation. The dancing is smooth and looks like it took a long time.
Keep up the good work!
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SOSArtStuff In reply to VengefulPhoenix [2016-05-02 17:49:17 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much! ^_^ And thanks for your input (also very sorry it took me so long to respond)
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potchika [2016-04-25 07:50:09 +0000 UTC]
the dance dont show any character blind
the walking animation is clunky
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SOSArtStuff In reply to potchika [2016-04-25 16:34:52 +0000 UTC]
do you have any suggestions on how to make it better?
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potchika In reply to SOSArtStuff [2016-04-25 20:15:23 +0000 UTC]
make the walking animation faster make the walking animation a copy of a true gif or vid of a walking person make the dance have some impact after anymovement chose a charasteristique make it clear on the character
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SOSArtStuff In reply to potchika [2016-05-02 17:53:37 +0000 UTC]
While it's not a true copy the animation is based on a reference of a real dancer.
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