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sour-milk-complex — Invulnerable desperation

Published: 2009-09-18 05:36:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 200; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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Description It can’t be touched.
This heart is focused
through fine points
that sear and burn
with no illumination,
dismantled at the joints.
An angler is a godsend
for a cataract soul.
I’ll throw my life
at jagged teeth
and let the dice roll.
God knows
I won’t go out alone;
It bubbles beneath plaster molds
of falsified fury
and cosmetic lust.
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Comments: 11

evilhamsterking [2009-09-18 05:55:12 +0000 UTC]

you should read this to me some time. like, I know it's not the same, but you should listen to "aseop rock" or atleast read the lyrics to some of their songs. XD

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sour-milk-complex In reply to evilhamsterking [2009-09-18 05:59:17 +0000 UTC]

like...read it to you personally? XD How cute would that be?

But no...is that a band, or a genre? Either way, I'm gonna go listen to it.

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evilhamsterking In reply to sour-milk-complex [2009-09-18 06:06:11 +0000 UTC]

haha it would be pretty cute XD
It's a band I guess... it's a rapper, but, eh, it's more like what those people who came to bear river and made us write poetry sound like XD
but I gues it's "aesop rock" XP anyways, I think yuo'd like this music video [link]

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sour-milk-complex In reply to evilhamsterking [2009-09-18 06:20:04 +0000 UTC]

ZOMBIIIES!!

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evilhamsterking In reply to sour-milk-complex [2009-09-18 06:21:25 +0000 UTC]

haha XD

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Hadeki [2009-09-18 05:44:39 +0000 UTC]

I think the words are too, like... mysterious and meaningful and I sort of forget what I'm reading.
I think it's about... a hopeless heart?

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sour-milk-complex In reply to Hadeki [2009-09-18 05:48:10 +0000 UTC]

More or less. I have your phone still by the way. I tried to call your mom over it but she never picked up, or came over to get it...soooo, yeah.

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Hadeki In reply to sour-milk-complex [2009-09-18 05:54:01 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, sorry... She never answers her phone. I'll try to get it some day.

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blakridershadow [2009-09-18 05:38:48 +0000 UTC]

I just adore your use of words. I enjoy this poem but I am not quite sure why... But It is well written.

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sour-milk-complex In reply to blakridershadow [2009-09-18 05:40:12 +0000 UTC]

thank you ^.^

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blakridershadow In reply to sour-milk-complex [2009-09-18 05:44:18 +0000 UTC]

You are very welcome dear. :]

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